The intro caught me by complete surprise, it was incredible. The framing of the short was frustrating, but only because I couldn't see the details well enough. I liked how short and sharp it started, then the slow intensity afterwards. It went perfect with the audio
@@RobrinLayona Thank you! I do apologize about the framing though. But there’s a reason for that: to bring some sort of suspense. If you’d like, you could also watch the other version on my channel. You could see the details more clearly :]
Honestly, the silent beginning was just adding to the quality. It made it seem much more ominous which I at least really enjoyed. Also, dang does that boy look tired, makes sense and all but I just love the details. Also, I love how you added hashtags around her when she said 'of course!' as well as the fact that-assuming here-that her hair was shifting into wings.
First of all, 3k views??!! Huh!!?? WHAT?! ❤ THANK YOU SO MUCH for the love and support of my version for Suffering!!! Your comments are always fun to read, especially with how quick you guys point out subtle details :] I can’t wait to finish Different Beast and see what you guys will think of it! Again, thank you! I’ll keep working hard and try not to mentally drain myself like I did with Suffering :7
I love how she tossed something in the area to expand her illusion to make it look like a family outing, it was a really nice touch to show she has a lot more influence than just her own appearance
THIS IS CRIMINALLY UNDERRATED, the expressions, the little details (like ody's eyes glowing then turning back to a tired expression when he has to remind himself it's not his wife) and BY THE GODS the bird siren, I've been longing for an animatic using them ! This is amazing and I love it
Thank you!! I've always added a bird siren when I imagine the little animation in my head- which I tried to replicate in the first half, just to get a bird-eyes view :>
Don’t fret, fellow viewer (or fan)! I am currently working on it and had recently finished my quick draft! Polishing and rendering takes time, but I will do my very best to try to finish it before the Wisdom Saga! If I’m late, then I’ll still keep going and hope for the best :7
I love the different details of this animatic, like how others have sirenelope slowly turning back into a fish siren you get her wings returning also the designs are great, I liked it
DUDE THIS ANIMATIC IS INSANE??? Literally so good. I love how much you can depict with just a few lines-- your expressionality w the characters' faces and posing is great. I think all the comedic moments are timed excellently and never overused, and you can really tell both Odysseus and the siren's thought processes. Anyway. Great animatic huge fan
I just realized my first sentence might be taken out of context-not saying your drawings in general are funny, just the ones with the more humorous themes like at 1:35 lol
AHHH!!! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS VERSION!! The transition of the bird into siren Penelope was amazing! Although, I would admit I though my phone was going wonky on me with how I didn’t hear anything at the beginning But DAM! The body language was perfect for Odysseus and Penelope! His goofy nature shining through his facade Speaking of facades, SIREN PENELOPE WAS AMAZING! Loving how the more irritated she becomes, the more her true nature shows! However I love how you show it changing in her back, that’s slowly growing into her front. Showing that her illusion is breaking apart. And the “you know I’m too shy, and terrified” part was just AHHHH!! PERFECT! PURE ANIME BOY RADIATES!!! Tho the intense glare siren Penelope gave him was hilarious If someone pulled that look, I would definitely try to murder them lol. OVERALL!! 10/10!!
bvjdhfbvdjh!!!! I'm glad you love it!! And yeah, I can understand why you thought there was no sound in the beginning. I couldn't really find any sources to add any sounds for that, sadly :P I also thought that Odysseus anime boy shinning through would probably fit him :> P.S I love your pfp :]
I just realized that the thumbnail is pretty blurry lol Other than that, which "design" for both Penelope and Odysseus do you guys like? As you could see, I got really indecisive and made them pretty different in each shot :|
@@ChupacabraRex Thank you!! I still have to make some adjustments with how Odysseus and Penelope will look like in the finished animatic I’m making :] Also, is it considered canon that odysseus is smaller than everyone??
@@Sender-vy9nj Not quite- but nice catch! It’s in the very beginning where there’s a silhouette of a broken ship, one where the sirens took over where Odysseus saw in different beast! Just a small detail I wanted to add :] But I’m glad you spot the gills tho :D
