🟦...(@3:27), All I heard was: "MY Eden has been.......".◼️ Unfortunately Captions are not provided,..but I think this is the Happiest sad-ending I've ever Seen! ...Anybody?
🟦... Unfortunately a goodly part of the dialogue was unintelligible between the background-track and the protagonist talking WAY too low Too-much of the time.
I agree with one of the posters about the sound. The background sound and music is too overpowering and it’s exceptionally difficult to understand the dialogue. I give the video a thumbs down just for that reason alone.
*I enjoyed it overall, very original The only constructive criticism I would like to share is what your as well as many of these "short films" do, and that's the ratio of background music far exceeds what it should and makes it very annoying/ difficult to listen to the dialogue. It would be different if it built up in intensity to a climatic/dramatic moment then goes back down to a reasonable volume, but it's just one consistent loud volume throughout. Thankfully, unlike yours, quite a few who do this have closed caption available where I can just turn the volume down or off and read the captions if the background volume is overwhelming to me.*
That is very realistic except for the part of taking pills every hour. That would make soldiers dealing with PTSD that have not been for treatment yet just want to go ahead and want to look into suicide because what kind of life can you have when you have to take a pill every hour for the rest of your life. Take it from someone who suffers from PTSD and who is now a counselor for others who suffer from it.
