My Judgment. 1: Eyes are generally 1 eye apart 2: the jaw needs to be titled to the left, its essential for the jaw to be almost perfect 3: the eyes need to be almost identical unless the character has a facial wound in that area or something similar 4: the eyes are too far to the right, it makes the viewer of this drawing seem like something is off 5: if your shading the lines need to me pointing the same way, otherwise it looks weird 6: the nose is a bit too far to the right 7: if your drawing a sketch then erase the thicker lines that aren't needed and replace them with thinner lines, this makes it look like a final drawing 8: Have a nice day :))