Just got recommended this video and I'm glad I did, it's very beautiful and I would love to hear a longer version! A small tip though: it would be better to rewrite how you group the notes. For example in bar 2, after the dotted quarter, rather than a quarter tied to an eighth, it should be the other way around (eighth tied to a quarter note). This keeps the values the same but makes it easier to read and comprehend. Amazing work though, please keep composing more!
Thank you so much for your comment, I really appreciate it! Your tip is very helpful, grouping is one thing I find a little challenging still but as I keep going I learn more. Glad you enjoyed!
