This is really an impeccable cover of a truly beautiful and challenging-to-play piece. Your technique is crisp and clean, your sound is like a bell and your phrasing is well chosen and very nicely executed. Well done! You deserve the kudos from Calum!
I would slow down the tempo and strive to play all the notes instead. The guitarist can clearly play this piece -- which is very difficult, albeit short -- but treats it superficially in my opinion.