Please make it a bit more structured and mix the vocals well. The constant shutter clicks, the vocals overpowering everything, and the random shifts in beat kind of throw me off. If you can't imagine yourself laying some bars down on it, it needs work.
the vocals sound fine and don't overpower anything. the entire point of the "random shifts" is what makes this beat incredible. its very obvious you haven't listened to any JPEGMAFIA and don't understand what the beat is trying to accomplish. also the phrase "If you can't imagine yourself laying some bars down on it, it needs work." is such a terrible and extremely close minded outlook. listen to what MC Ride is able to rap over in Death Grips' music. as long as you have a competent lyricist the beat is manageable.
@@jackzfr1650 i get what ur trying to criticise and it’s all subjective so ig ur right from a pov. but most of the things you pointed out are intentionally like that. most jpegmafia type beats are unconventionally structured and mixed bc the whole point is to make something that doesn’t work, work. appreciate the advice tho
