Not bad. The buildup needs some work, it sounds to.. stereotypical? I'd recommend throwing in a song you like or a popular one and try creating a buildup similar to theirs so you can get a feel of how to do it a bit better. Maybe like a Code: Pandorum song or something. I like the drops synths though and the kick and snare come through really well.
I think it sounds great and maybe he's doing his own thing and doesn't want to sound like Code Pandorum?! Either you like it or you don't? Simple as that. Great song Abominal! ☠️
