Not a dance teacher but as a dancer the girls could have more expression on their faces and not look down as much... And a lot of work to be done with technique.
Start of the dance... Back row, 2nd from the right, dark-wavy hair...I see you👍 Not sure why you're dancing in the back and don't have any special parts, but coming from someone who's taught children (of all ages) dance her whole life I can see you move well to your music and also keep really good time with the rhythm, your movements are sharp & precise, and you also have nice turns! Keep up the good work everybody!!😊❤