cool story. Kinda sad. Huamnity just "win" battle of New terra. More scary would be if aliens coaliton win... And they hummanity.. just NUKE THIER OWN PLANET, to have last word. and make aliens force destroyed by this with bilions of humans. And then alliens was like -> "THEY JUST DESTROY WHOLE PLANET... KILL BILIONS OF THIER OWN... JUST TO DONT GIVE US A WIN... THEY KILL THEMSELF... TO DONT LOOSE... "
Aliens - lets give hummanity super technlogy which push thier advance to 200 years to future! So they can join galactic alliance! HUmanity - nice stuff... Can we use it to even faster killing eachoter? Aliens - ... WHAT?
This narrated like it's a chapter in a grade school history book. And the premise would've been more believable if the ship had been multi-generational and the humans, having faced the loss of their planet, learned from their mistakes. Not to mention traveling for years on a ship would've taught them better resource management as well as respect for anothers space
This story is the best I have read - so far, at least - in this series of stories. The story contains the seed of many more stories dealing with the interactions of AI and humans.it is fertile ground for the imagination. I will add that I was very pleased to come across a story that was not filled with slimy-scaled alien warlords whose razor-sharp talons ripped up the armrests of their chairs. Thank god, there was none of that. Please, more stories like this one! And, it’s almost time to consider a series of paperbacks. My thanks and congratulations!
Um....there's no air on The Moon. And where are the cats? Cats love combat! And they are madly territorial. They don't need handlers. Just food and someone to point the way.
This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Bravo to the Author. To those are confused about the image and the story don't seem to be in synch. The female in the image is the AI Lyra.
Until this one, all of these stories have been entertaining and well written. It's very interesting to see that you can get a spectrum of writing out of AI's. I'll be very interested in explanations of what's going on. Different AI's, different prompts, different training. . . . . . . . .
Most of these stories on RU-vid need proofreading before posting. Many repetitions, mispronunciations, weird inflections, etc. make some of these stories hard to listen to. Also, is the alien’s name Zigor, Zagor, Zagar, Zegor, Zygore or what? It keeps changing.
Ok perhaps mars had been terreformed but the moon... Also if.the dogs senses could be that easily enhanced why not the humans? Interesting idea but i think that some aspects may have been overtaken by reality.
The first half is pretty good but the last half is all talk talk talk talk talk talk blah blah blah blah blah blah. But I should just listening to the first part until the rain is over on the attractions
Then the Zarixians searched for the source of the xenopathogen. And as the trail of destruction led to the Sol system and then third planet from Sol they discovered a Wuhan laboratory in the country of China had created the virus doing "research" of gain of function was the root of the pathogen. Angered by this discovery and the carelessness of these humans they demanded an explanation but received only denial of any wrong doing and pointed to the American scientist who funded their research, placing the blame on him for his profiteering greediness and his connection a pharma company named Pfizer and their unsuccessful attempt at making a vaccine for the pathogen they had help create the Xarixians decided to annihilate the entire planet to rid the universe of a bunch of lying politicians, ruthless fearmongering Pharmaceutical degenerates and profiteering scumbags.
Hopefully, first contact might one day might mimic this story rather than just that of a frightened little Ailen girl hearing snarling dogs and helicopters searching for her getting closer and closer.
Good story, good narration, good artwork... the captioning though is obnoxious. If I want captioning, I can turn it on/off through you tube. You are creating unnecessary extra work for yourself.
