Ohio state law states crossing gates & bells are required on rail lines with medium to heavy rail traffic, being a tourist line the LM&M sees light traffic at MOST.
I must apologies for any audio issues there were during the video, I've been tinkering with a few settings, and must have accidentally screwed with the sound settings.
The shots are better framed, and selected out, but I think your ISO is too high making your exposure a littoe bit high. But other than that it looks great!
Your stuff is getting better! You're pans could still use some work, and some of the shots are a little tilted, but your lighting is good, your shots are pretty good, and the editing is good. There's also no audio obstruction. I'd say go film some like diesels or something, get a good practice for smooth and slow pans, and shoot your shot at another steam man!