Thanks frien that was a Great job and very lucidly brought out. It reminds us of the teachers in our primary school days who messed up the whole concept when passing it on to their students.
What was the rush? I felt you just wanted to finish and be done with this ASAP!! No design explanation e.g what colour look good for drawing attention to certain areas, what the 1/3 rule, for designing a drawing? If you took these points into consideration how more helpful would this video be?