These lyrics are BEAUTIFUL. They work very well to present the lesson that localization & matching the original feeling/intent of the work in your translation, especially in music, is often more important than translating lyrics as directly as possible. I was especially impressed by the "One ear right out the other 'cuz I haven't got all day" line. It's difficult to directly translate that line without removing the sorta accusatory tone and making the singer sound more passively bored, so opting for an indirect translation was perfect. You are criminally underrated - I hope that you never become discouraged from singing or become convinced to drop the unique charm of your translyrics.
I've had a few rude comments about my lyrics that I had to delete because it was just not good for my mental health to keep it up there. Comments like this mean a lot knowing that people like you appreciate them. I cherish this forever. Thank you.
How are you so underrated?? I usually dont comment this kind of stuff but HOLY your voice is amazing, like you're a professional singer right? You have to be. I genuinely cant even wrap my head around how this is even possible to achieve. Just, wow.