You have a good entry homie! I didn't enter this contest but if you'd like, subscribe to me, let me know you did through a msg, reply, comment or tweet (@SpitfireRhymes) and i'll sub right back! Keep working & good luck!
fuck what anyone says bro we all start the same way and i can see u rising to the top man perfect that delivery a lil bit more and u got this... peep my entry too man much love from the chi
Thanks man, appreciate it!& don't forget to subscribe, I got more heat along the way! & I checked out your entry bruh and I got say that it's really dope. Best of luck to you bro.
Honestly, I really wasn't feeling you on this, man. You fell off beat a few times (I don't know if that was on purpose) and you had some corny rhymes. Other rhymes were dope, but your whole delivery is ruining it for me. I'm not talking shit, I'm just giving you criticism to help out, bruh.
Its all good, I appreciate the honest feedback. With that said, I still suggest that you subscribe for my future stuff cause trust me, alot of my material after this is signficantly better.
This was dope bro! Loved the flow, energy an lyrics! Well I def gave it a thumbs up! An subscribed to you, too see what else you got in store! Anyway Like an Comment on a couple of my videos also subscribe for ya boi!!!? Thanks yo!! -Essence C
Ey man, Really like what you were able to put together in this video. Took what you had and turned it into something cool and interesting to watch, and that's dope. Your voice is lower than I expected - and you can turn that into a strong suit. I'd agree with Ali, though - it wouldn't hurt to up your delivery. That extra UMPH. Luck man
Thanks man, I appreciate that. & yea, listening to it now I understand what you guys mean. I'm definitely going to work on that. Good luck to you as well man.
Where you from, my dude? And also, here's some advice for you, you have a good flow going on, I do think that you could have some better delivery to compliment it. Also, add a bit more energy in your voice, make me feel what you are rapping about, you know? Keep it up, J. Kalif, ad check my entry when you can
not bad man good use of multi syllibles critism would be you need to tighten your flow a bit man. check mine when you have a chance and let me know what you think.
