In the middle, You should add a bridge, shorten the pre chorus, and add a chorus in the middle. Kinda like how you did in the beginning. Do that and I’m buying this mf and you gonn have a platinum plaque I promise you.
…. sometimes Im not my self only thinking bout this wealth Wishing that ill make a mill I don’t care bout how I feel I’m chasing dreams don’t interfere Only god I really fear Gods the one who helped me here Hold me down I hope you carex2 When nobody there i just drown my self Sometimes I can’t love myself I been trying hard to just love for real These bitches just ain’t shit for real I’ll never love no bitch for real Said fuck that I need 6 mil If I die soon I was prob killed Tell my family that I love them still I won’t give up Till my heart is filled I been grinding crazy bet you never will They could do me bogus I’ll still never kill Idgaf bout how you feel I could die today Look at what I built Do this for my momma I’m still hurting still
По сравнению с тобой я high, а ты играешь в лимбо, Кама, скажи им как раньше говорил джимбо, Не играй на моих чувствах бейба, либо ты, Или мы, станем психами, что не захотят завтра.
Mi yo interno dice que pare Que no me compare Que estoy perdido por mi. Vale Más valentía y gua fría Mas melodia perderme en mia Ya no salia y quien la lia Con mis problemas mentales De quedarme encerrado Con los instrumentales Perdido en musica y en musicales Vee alo bueno y curs tus males Rosas
