Your work was stolen and submitted to the 2023 contest as "Feathered Friends in Tranquility - Dota 2 Short Film Contest 2023" . Please do something with it.
Awesome! 0:21 lol D: Cool idea and storytelling short smooth transitions are done so well. The lightning/cc also looks great. Only 1 thing here that I don't like, it's SF ulti animation and fast fade out. Don't get me seriously it's only subjective first-view feelings. That moment at 1:21 is not bad but it looks technically weak for this level of work. Why is it so important? It just doesn't accent that epicness of the story with a cherry (egg) on top, imo. I would rather see in this particular moment more cams, complex smokes with reddish glow streaks, particles, and cinematic slowmoootion with some awesome sfx behind. Then I'd say you fkn nailed it. I understand that it's damn difficult to create, check out the obscurus scenes in Fantastic Beasts. Please, don't get me wrong, the work looks incredible in any way. But for my eye it doesn't give a viewer much time to realize what happened and get potential chills with a visual orgasm at the end, you know.
That hurricane is pretty weak though, I had the idea that the bird survives and kills the weak Lina after SF ult. Since Lina started it all, but experts said this way is better, we just executed it bad.
Thanks for the lovely comment! The idea is to show the birds horrible life and that this event happen pretty often, the egg survived and is going to be another bird!
