I see you kinda took my advice! You did awesome man! And I feel like that one bumb who throws you under the bus all the time but: Although you were using grenades, you should utilize them in a more effective way, like throwing it into a cluster of enemy's or let it roll a little past them for a behind offensive. The more you play Destiny, you should also experiment as to wear the enemies are weak. That SuperCharge would've saved you at 24:02 if you noticed the 2 red arrows pointing to your left. But still YOU WERE AMAZING :D I'd love to see some more gameplay and always enjoy sending you feedback to help you c: (Put me in competitive gameplay though? And I'm not mlg anymore lol)