It is my humble request, please don't mix Kashmiri and urdu , because the old and illiterate females can't understand your waaz... kindly notice it and improve if you think I am right
Zulam sub loog krtay hai hum loogu pay plz sir dua kro puffi zada zulam krti hai hum bogund kulgam say hai ab aziz parray k bacchay aur gunngi maaa hai