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@jefflewis836
@jefflewis836 6 часов назад
You totally blew it on this story. Firat half wasn't very good. Second half was totally screwed. Way, way, way, way to much diarrhea of the mouth ssying too much without saying much. Like a Kamala Harris speech. Last 15 minutes and after the weird facial expressions and maniac laughter are removed not much left and most of it forgettable if not for it being recorded and then shown for her incompetence to be on display for Republicans to rightfully make fun of. The rest of the world does the same. Like Rodney Dangerfield..... She can't get no respect no respect at all.😢😢
@JohnSheffield1963
@JohnSheffield1963 8 часов назад
I admit I am only seven minutes into this, but I get the feeling that either the writer has little knowledge or experience with biology or human reproduction. Is this AI generated? The discussion doesn't follow what I'd call a logical progression. The human xenobiologist, even though it is clear from the beginning he is attracted to her, should have asked more about what the alien already knew, or thought she knew, in order to establish a starting point. Ten minutes in, the human character should be anything other than a scientist. He talks more like a poet, a member of the clergy, a fiction writer, or some kind of non-scientist. Even distracted by his obvious attraction, anyone with clinical or scientific training would be doing a better job. Covering a few other issues first, even by just saying that the mechanics and biological aspects of reproduction are on file in some database that they both had access to, would allow for a more logical. Then the progression into a discussion of pair bonds and emotional attachments could be discussed as having their roots in the development and nurturing of offspring. Many of those connections are associated with, but not requirements of, the bio-mechanics. A life form that reproduced using some kind of telepathic, or electronic data transmission likely wouldn't have many common frames of reference to even communicate the ideas. Unless we find out she is the product of some kind of sentient machine culture, that is a little difficult to make plausible in this short amount of time. Asking if all life on her world reproduced in similar ways to what she reported and otherwise settling on common terminology.
@michaelblankenship6125
@michaelblankenship6125 19 часов назад
Written poorly and you could lied to us to make the story better leaves to many questions Like they where stuck on that planet I rate the story a C-
@Mike-nc4kl
@Mike-nc4kl День назад
them, they, thier, the child... is it the gender nonspecific? the child looks up thier eyes bright... how many kods are there anyway...
@jezeski2011
@jezeski2011 День назад
Nice story, but a bit too repetitive
@AstroNight44
@AstroNight44 День назад
The image shows two little girls working on something, but the story is about adult women sharing wine then hoping into a titan? It also seems to start halfway through the story. What's going on?
@michaelblankenship6125
@michaelblankenship6125 3 дня назад
A fair story but it could have had a better ending ! and how the hell did she fly off in her ship that was destroyed ? For that a rate the story B -
@jefflewis836
@jefflewis836 3 дня назад
Mislabeled. Wrong story.
@user-vv5lt1ib7v
@user-vv5lt1ib7v 4 дня назад
Need a more sure reader, please.
@ronsindric4241
@ronsindric4241 7 дней назад
Narrative says SNOW, initial post image has no snow but desert SAND !
@samallan6616
@samallan6616 7 дней назад
Funny! This needs to be made into a short video!
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 7 дней назад
nice
@wrath4452
@wrath4452 7 дней назад
Giving it a 2/5. One point deducted for AI art, another point docked for AI VOICE and third that it’s pretty fuckin’ weird bro
@livingperson7403
@livingperson7403 8 дней назад
Indominable Human Rizz
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 8 дней назад
cool story
@dtbramwell
@dtbramwell 10 дней назад
Seems to be a disconnect between subject/graphic and storyline. Or did I lack the patience.
@professorsponge1554
@professorsponge1554 12 дней назад
this story is terrible. The more HFY stories i see, the worse they get.
@jcalpha2717
@jcalpha2717 12 дней назад
How far away did they park their ship. Hours trudging through the snow and relentless wind ??
@thatotherguy7596
@thatotherguy7596 12 дней назад
Even in the distant future, some people don't know how to park. 😁
@johanrdc1
@johanrdc1 10 дней назад
@@thatotherguy7596 Dumb !!
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 12 дней назад
good job
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 12 дней назад
cool story
@timl8302
@timl8302 13 дней назад
Uh, they still have a second saboteur.
@Valkyrie77
@Valkyrie77 15 дней назад
Okay story but no HFY.
@kimwilliams722
@kimwilliams722 15 дней назад
I really liked that one and you didn't even swear at me I don't like prophanity especially in my stories and movies and you tube
@wakcedout
@wakcedout 15 дней назад
aliens will be wise to learn from earths own history of warfare....attack a military outpost, we fight vicously with purpose....attack civilians, we fight brutally as if madmen unleashed.....attack children.....may whatever god you believe in have mercy on your soul as we send you to them, because we will be merciless in our vengence.
@michab8824
@michab8824 15 дней назад
Ehh another looping story
@sorenkasten1071
@sorenkasten1071 15 дней назад
Поганий Well dont up ai generated stories before you heard or read it yourself. A double of the final plot. A shame
@Kahnanesgi
@Kahnanesgi 15 дней назад
Right, so humans are immune to the lasers. But nothing else is. Clothes, gear, weapons, things, etc aren't, so all the aliens need do it just shoot at the humans and whatever they're wearing and carrying will be destroyed (and possibly hurting the human holding it). Also, since the laser are passing right through the human unimpeded, whatever is carried on the back is fair game. The aliens don't even need to flank the humans to target what is behind them. Humans would be completely disarmed and disabled in short order. No need to revert to "conventional" weaponry. It's Interesting premise, but not fully thought out.
@christopherarnold352
@christopherarnold352 15 дней назад
If humans were immune then why did they need to make the serum for the soldiers?
@ricardokojin7
@ricardokojin7 15 дней назад
I'm pretty sure if humans are immune, the first order would be "get them boys"
@greggwilliamson
@greggwilliamson 17 дней назад
Story has no premice. Kindly point to Europa and bargain for the best price. Twice as much water as Earth.
@grantgunz
@grantgunz 17 дней назад
The Zarkan - we hate these guys! 3000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained! Humans . . . we call them war apes! Born on a Death World. Pro-tip: Never go after human cubs. If you do you just signed your death warrant.
@ashardalondragnipurake
@ashardalondragnipurake 17 дней назад
... desalination so this intergalactic union of interstellar empires capable of faster then light travel havnt figured out how to boil water and thats ignoring how most water in the galaxy is fresh frozen in space but i guess if they havnt figured out how to boil water they probably also dont know how to melt ice ... somehow thats just dumb aliens needing to be completely moronic required to make humans look in any way smart the worst version of these stories
@gearheadgregwi
@gearheadgregwi 19 дней назад
The Resonator 😂😂😂 a good name for a revolver
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 19 дней назад
Cool story, like it
@leorapsonjr7659
@leorapsonjr7659 19 дней назад
😂 it's a Smith & Wesson 66, the pic is flipped backwards. Cylinder release and ejecter are on the left side not the right.
@N0sf3r4tuR1s3n
@N0sf3r4tuR1s3n 19 дней назад
Yeah like why'd they do that? Almost all revolvers are set up for right handed shooters, so that's weird.
@ilovedetails
@ilovedetails 20 дней назад
AI Non sense
@kuvceebxab1
@kuvceebxab1 21 день назад
Australia is nation of victems, we are NOT even allowed to defend ourselves,home etc let alone owning a gun. Sad to say.
@douglasberard8664
@douglasberard8664 21 день назад
Firearms are banned in Australia, They're SO Toast🤗
@cubiusblockus3973
@cubiusblockus3973 21 день назад
Not banned, just have to have a reason other than self defence, like hunting. Cant get certain weapons without very difficult and special permits, like handguns or automatics. If you have any mental health issues at all, you wont be able to get licencing. Gun safes have to be in places not in your home at all, so at the gun range or a shed on the We dont have a big gun culture here, but it does exist.
@davidmeier8548
@davidmeier8548 21 день назад
Isolated . Usually means it's a few hundred miles from anywhere
@westnerrs2084
@westnerrs2084 21 день назад
First! 😅
@grantgunz
@grantgunz 21 день назад
The Cran - we hate these guys! 2000 quatloo's the humans cannot be stopped!
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 21 день назад
Cool story
@1sixscalecrafter351
@1sixscalecrafter351 21 день назад
They got screw over twice and the same story .. then rescued again ... got me screw up too .. had to stop and leave .. sorry this AI Voice as the narrator is getting on my last nerves and the Cylon Krylon names are misspelled .. later .. thanks for trying ... this one is just not for me😑😐🤨😓😞💩
@craigsawicky1643
@craigsawicky1643 22 дня назад
Continuity is scrambled.
@wardenweaver3320
@wardenweaver3320 22 дня назад
The AI narration was a bit frustrating. She should have come back to see him. It was pretty easy to visualize the story which was a big plus. @stonepvv Personally, I like the blue skin.
@joanwagner2538
@joanwagner2538 22 дня назад
It jumps from the out back to the amozon jungle?
@Ai-Art-42
@Ai-Art-42 22 дня назад
Good work
@Madjuls
@Madjuls 22 дня назад
A good story.
@davemi00
@davemi00 23 дня назад
Two different versions in the same story. Interesting.
@markblack5460
@markblack5460 23 дня назад
Restless crew just needs some shore leave...
@timadams6801
@timadams6801 23 дня назад
À.i..lol...