This not so professional tgcf reaction video critic here. I suggest making the heavenly officials care more that hua cheng is in the same room as them. It states in the book that just mentioning “crimson red clothes” makes every heavenly officials hair on their neck stand up. I also suggest that hua cheng shows more of a mature reaction to things and only make his thoughts immature. Hua cheng is intelligent and sassy but at the same time he is cool and aloof. Hua cheng only tends to sincerely smile at Xie Lian, if he’s smiling at anyone else it a smile of mockery or it telling the other person he’s better then them. I suppose the other characters are alright but I think you should look into their character more to understand them better. But for Xie Lian make him less sassy and kind looking. Like at 4:49 you should’ve changed the mouth to a smile, keep the eyes the same though. The timeline you chose was also confusing so I would enjoy if you specified the timeline. This is my feedback even though no one asked for this. Please don’t take this as a hate comment, I’m just attempting to help for future reaction videos because there are far too many reaction videos that are out of character for mine and other peoples liking. Thank you for reading and please use this information. And with that, have a splendid day
