FTA. Lovely story. Magical or wish transformations always make me question if this could happen irl would the person undergoing the transformation retain the knowledge of the former life. I understand the need to retain this knowledge for the narrative storyline. I think life moving forward would have more meaning if some knowledge of a previous life was retained.
in number 3 Sarah would want to hide those books well after she returned him to his former self as her could return the favor to her or dispose of the books ( or make her think he had ) so she couldn't do it to him again
Nice stories ! I liked #2 and #3 the best and would not mind meeting the witch from the 2nd story or getting ahold of the book from the 3rd story. Your stories are very amusing
i really like your stories, It takes a very special kind of person to help his friend like this, very few people around these days that would be willing to do this kind of thing. if only there were real spell casters around that could help people, i would give or do anything within reason to meet one
It's hard to listen to the voice of such a young child using words like cacophony. In the future you might want to match the age of the voice with the age/ maturity of the language
Very nice story and message about acceptance, if only spell casters like these two moms were real i would seek them out in a heartbeat no matter the cost. as mentioned by someone else there is a hic up where the story repeats in 1 section
FTA. This is a wonderfully descriptive storyline that allows the listener to immerse themselves in the narrative of empathy, understanding, growth and strength of character. Thank you Lacy and Olivia for sharing this, you're appreciated. ❤
FTA A lovely continuation of this beautiful story, thank you girls for sharing this. On a slight negative you may want to check the narration track as it repeats a section between time stamps 25:07 and 33:52 which detracts from the flow.
Very enjoyable story so far and I like you message about understanding and not judging. I would love to find a spell caster like her mom. It would be a dream come true !! Even through I would love to be 7 it's not logical for me so 18 would be good