I had a dream a couple years back I passed out from liquor and was very depressed and I dreamed I was falling from the sky and this sound was playing at the time I've never heard this song before but I was determined to find it and that I did
That's really good! You have a comforting soft voice. It'd be great if you accelerate the tempo a little bit. It'd replace the lack of drum percussion but you did really great! Keep going.