Man I think your cuts were really good but the sound work needs more attention. You need to reduce the music of the original cuts and enhance vocals. Also place which sound effects need to stay. Some of the energy sounds really enchance the music. Also the mix of japanese and english felt a little jumbled.
Thank you for your opinion, but I made this like 1 year ago, now I've got a bit more experience. By the way, right now I am trying to make edit on last DBS episodes, so keep watching and writing your opinion, cause it helps me getting better better! :)