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Комментарии
@MorganAndFriendsGacha-ks3yt
@MorganAndFriendsGacha-ks3yt 2 часа назад
As a Hazbin Hotel fan, I really like this video and agree with your opinions ! Tbh, in my opinion, you should make more Hazbin videos, this was great ! :D
@chef6886
@chef6886 3 часа назад
Respectless isn’t perfect, and I agree with most your points, but it feels like you just really don’t like velvettes character. I personally like that despite being “modern” she still talks like some people did like, 5 or so years ago? You complaining that she’s “terminally quirky” is more of an “issue” with velvette that carries into respectless. Good video tho, nice job 👍
@EagleTimberWolf
@EagleTimberWolf 4 часа назад
I think the funniest part about Respectless is the fact that it was immediately followed by a superior song. First off, even people who have never made a musical know that you typically need to space out the songs so that they're not crammed together like sardines (there IS a way to make back-to-back songs work but this ain't it chief), and secondly, all it did was provide a stark contrast that made the previous song look even worse.
@ArmednotTriggered
@ArmednotTriggered 4 часа назад
As forced as the "Medium is getting bloody rare" verse may be, I absolutely love that line. Totally agree with your assessment overall though.
@EvanMonroe
@EvanMonroe 5 часов назад
At long last! Absolutely loved "Hazbin Hotel", but it has its share of flaws. Super informative video as always.
@risingtide7244
@risingtide7244 5 часов назад
I'm glad I'm justified in my general neutralness to Respectless. I thought it was fine, just not excellent, especially compared to almost everything else.
@pinkcuddlycactus
@pinkcuddlycactus 7 часов назад
I'm so sorry but the volume is actually so low, I can barely hear it.
@TheApoke
@TheApoke 10 часов назад
Super under rated video!! I feel like I learned a lot and the jokes were really funny but didn't get in the way of the information
@ShiraCheshire
@ShiraCheshire 10 часов назад
I was so disappointed in Hazbin's music. With most songs I was just waiting for them to end. I don't get it. The song you pointed out as a good example was AMAZING, and Helluva Boss has some really good songs in it. So why did so many Hazbin Hotel songs leave me just sitting there hoping they'll end as soon as possible?
@ellielewis3185
@ellielewis3185 11 часов назад
there are a host of content/thematic things in this movie that Disney will probably never deal with directly again in a movie (religion, lust, racism/discrimination, objectification of women, etc...) all that's to say that we need to cherish this movie for what it is 😆 it's an amazing movie and deeply underwatched
@zephlodwick1009
@zephlodwick1009 11 часов назад
I'm glad I'm not the only person who disliked this song. I do not understand why it's so popular. Even when I was watching it, I remember being a little uncomfy. At the time I chocked it up to me not liking bitchy characters, which is weird, cause Vivsie shows normally have enjoyable bitchy characters. But yeah, "I'm a hashtag bitch" made me cringe. I'd also point out it makes no sense from a storytelling perspective. Velvet says she wants to fight the angels, and then when other characters do fight the angels, she's hauled up in her bunker and doesn't seem to care. The only V who is invested is Vox because he wants to see Al die. Also Velvet doesn't do anything after "Respectless." Why was this song given to her? Well I know why. The writers had this character lying around and they needed her to do something. For the supposed backbone of the Vs, she's pretty abdent. Vox acts like the backbone of the Vs. Here's how I'd fix it. Give it to Alastor. Obviously you'd have to rework the instrumentals and lyrics to fit the character, but the basic idea that Alastor's motive is to gain others' respect and fear, while he maintains this aloof devil-may-care attitude like he's above how others think of him, while in reality being very thin-skinned. He was even slighted earlier in the meeting when Camilla said she didn't wonder what he did when he was gone. Al would also be a much better contrast to Camilla's down-to-earth focus on self-preservation than just some mouthy braggart we barely see again. And Al, y'know, FIGHTS THE ANGELS HE SAYS HE WANTS TO FIGHT. Broadly, Hazbin's great, but this song and "Welcome to Heaven" are two go-to how-tos on how not to write a showtune. I think what happened is that the songwriters had a quota of two songs per episode so they stuck songs where there shouldn't be. They could've cut this song to make room for an Adam attack song in the final episode.
@zephlodwick1009
@zephlodwick1009 11 часов назад
Al is also a mouthy braggart, but he's classier about it and has a bite to match his bark.
@ziziJ1235
@ziziJ1235 12 часов назад
This song is very similar to Twisted from Twisted the musical
@kitsunemoon3005
@kitsunemoon3005 12 часов назад
Y'all shan't
@shineyluna1268
@shineyluna1268 14 часов назад
I am a shamless Hazbin fan. But i am ALWAYS down for some good lyrical analysis
@Ray-hk1zm
@Ray-hk1zm 15 часов назад
Oh my GOD thank you, I've literally never seen anybody do such an effective takedown of this song (and then contrast it with my favorite song in the whole show!!! BANGER TAKES). I think Respectless also (like a lot of Hazbin songs) suffers a lot from the eschewing of natural syllable fluctuation in favor of fitting the melody (even the way that she draws out "Respectless" is just... not how that word is pronounced). Drives me insane, and is another reason that I love Stayed Gone because it all feels right. EDIT: I'll fight you on the bloody rare line, though. "Now his medium is getting bloody rare" is the funniest line in any song in this show bar none.
@pawnhearts8785
@pawnhearts8785 17 часов назад
I still love how Hazbin's most embarrassing song is better than Wish's most well-written song.
@lastoutcast1541
@lastoutcast1541 17 часов назад
Rewatching that Respectless scene just made me think it’d sound more interesting if it wasn’t a song and was just a tense scene
@yzmathehufflepuff6631
@yzmathehufflepuff6631 17 часов назад
THANK YOU My friend and I were ranking HH songs and for some reason they decided that respectless is one of the best songs and I just straight up went "not for me." The melody is so grating to my ears and I think it's my least favorite song in the show. That or Hell is Forever, which I have a lot of the same problems with
@Dorkish
@Dorkish 18 часов назад
the fact that this villain song is a pop song also ruins the vibe as well. Usually villain songs hide a dark undertone or are large and frightful. These songs aren't usually supposed to be peppy or upbeat like this songs instrumental is.
@rando_calrissian
@rando_calrissian 18 часов назад
It's unfortunate that Carmilla's VA has arguably the best singing ability in the cast but the 3 songs she's in are the worst.
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 16 часов назад
that's not even close to being true Jeremy Jordan and Alex Brightman are just 2 examples also the songs she's in are not the worst in the show your telling me you think Whatever It Takes Out For Love and Respect less are worse than Welcome To Heaven and It Starts With Sorry?
@kitsunemoon3005
@kitsunemoon3005 18 часов назад
4:03 Yeah I can see why that's a problem. I think there's two big issues contributing to that is: a) The show is packing plot for a 15-25 episode season into only 8 episodes. Since there's so much plot and only 160-240 minutes to pack all that plot in, there's a lot of telling and not showing because telling requires less time. And probably the reason why this is a song (aside from the 2 song per episode quota) rather than dialogue is because a song is shorter (and more entertaining) so it goes with that decision. It also does this with You Didn't Know. b) it's trying to tell you about characters who are going to become more relevant, just not right now. While normal fans who have seen other material like comics, the pilot episode, livestreams, etc. know more about characters like Carmilla and the Vees, and know their importance while a casual viewer who knows nothing about the show when they first click on is questioning why Velvette and Carmilla get a song (and why Carmilla even gets 3 songs) when the people getting songs should be Charlie and the gang, and Adam, the main antagonist who's the main antagonist of season 1. So it needs to try to tell you about the Vees and establish their importance when we get season 2 and they become the main antagonists than just establishing the Vees naturally because of above point.
@Xeorboom
@Xeorboom 19 часов назад
I really love Respectless because it's not meant to be good! Velvette is someone who died around 2010 at the age of around 21 and speaks with slang words so the point is that it's meant to sound like an improvised hype song wrote in the 2000s Sometimes a song's lyrics abd vibes don't have to be perfect as long as they fit the character. In this case, Vel is arrogant, annoying and fairly young so the kind of pointless nature fits for someone with those traits
@hempcats
@hempcats 17 часов назад
imo if they were going for that they could've leaned a little more into her immaturity and made it more of an "unintentionally" comedic song, though i see what you mean
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 12 часов назад
What do you mean its not meant to be good?
@nanuqo2006
@nanuqo2006 21 час назад
nah respectless was peak
@nickfroml4d289
@nickfroml4d289 21 час назад
Always love it when you upload your videos are really entertaining keep it up 👍
@AJedits65
@AJedits65 21 час назад
6:36 I hate how kept replaying this shot of the annoying white girl who was forced into this movie lol
@emduquemack7514
@emduquemack7514 21 час назад
is the volume kinda low on this video?
@dundeecake
@dundeecake 21 час назад
Critique Click Click by De'Vious Twins Song from Rainbow High
@thesparkleunicorn14
@thesparkleunicorn14 22 часа назад
I honestly would adore if you analyzed "You didnt know" not just cause its a personal fav, but because i find it so jumbled that its perfect for dissecting, imo atleast
@kitsunemoon3005
@kitsunemoon3005 18 часов назад
I'd like to add in my two cents because although I've warmed up to it more, it's still by far not my favourite song. (spoiler warning) While Astor can dissect the rhymes, I cannot. However, I do like to dissect themes. And, in my opinion, You Didn't Know just misses the mark. When it comes to themes, I feel like it's all over the place. First, it starts off with questioning about Heaven's standards and saying that it's unfair, then it goes to Emily being shocked by Adam and Lute's exterminations, then Emily and Charlie raging against heaven, then ends with Adam and Lute telling that Vaggie is an angel. I feel like the song would've been fine with sticking with questioning heaven or just rebelling against them or just making the song dialogue because it's more believable for dialogue to constantly switch topics as people bounce off ideas and go off topic. But a song constantly switching topics and themes feels off. And I felt like the song was dragged out with Adam and Lute telling Vaggie was an angel. This would've been fine as dialogue. Everytime I listen to the song, I end up just skipping to the next song after it ends with the 'Hell is Forever' reprise because it doesn't sound good nor does it stick with any of the other song's points about heaven's standards or rebelling against it.
@valmoribal
@valmoribal 22 часа назад
While I agree there are lame redundant lyrics in this, I actually enjoy the way this villain song deviates from the trope because Magnifico is a villain who thinks he’s a hero. Most Disney villains know they’re villains, but Magnifico, being deluded, gets an upbeat pop song for his villain song.
@theagentsquidfiles504
@theagentsquidfiles504 22 часа назад
I would like to defend one of Velvette's choices a bit because I think there's an element missing in this analysis. Velvette isn't the "hip new thing", she's the hip new POWER. She's not a social media user or even an influencer: she's a social media developer and marketing executive. No, nobody in common parlance actually says "hashtag" out loud. But I believe I've heard media executives do it in interviews, and I've seen it in programs that think they're being hip with the kids. Realistically, these people are probably playing it up for the camera and, in an actual conversation, wouldn't talk like this, but I do think Velvette is playing it up for the Overlords in-character. I'm surprised you didn't rag on the random "WOOO!!!" she does, though. It's an affectation to "do as I please," but doing as you please doesn't tend to say any random noises for the sake of... well, yeah, quirkiness.
@morgue.dweller
@morgue.dweller 22 часа назад
this channel has made me think about music in a different way. I've never watched Hazbin Hotel or Helluva Boss but I've definitely heard divisive opinions on the music.
@pawnhearts8785
@pawnhearts8785 17 часов назад
Odd, because from what I've seem the music easily the most praised aspect of it.
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 22 часа назад
What's so bad about Respectless the lyrics fit with Velvette's character its easily the catchiest song in the show and Velvette's fake cockney accent is perfect for the song
@leshi97
@leshi97 18 часов назад
I mean if you watch the video she explains why she thinks it doesn't work
@tikki2340
@tikki2340 22 часа назад
I really like hearing your thoughts on the hazbin soundtrack
@samuelline9573
@samuelline9573 22 часа назад
My issues with Respectless is the same issue I have with many Lin Manuel Miranda songs. Where you'll have a fine line, but then a yo, yeah, bro, etc. gets thrown into it and doesn't really add anything. It just reads as very "how do you do fellow kids."
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 22 часа назад
Agree to disagree Lin Manuel Miranda is an excellent songwriter
@pawnhearts8785
@pawnhearts8785 17 часов назад
Lin-Manuel Miranda is a far stronger songwriter than Haft or Underberg and I love Hazbin's music. Songs like Satisfied and Yorktown are phenomenally written
@TekTheNinja
@TekTheNinja 23 часа назад
Interested in more Hazbin content even if this one was actually one of my favorite songs from the series lol
@TekTheNinja
@TekTheNinja 23 часа назад
My main problem with this song is mostly the fact that Velvette (and Vox for that matter) are both irrelevant characters for this season who they seemed to just give songs for the sake of making people interested in and keep note of them for later. Funny that Valentino, the only one of the Vees who has a relevant connection to a main character that's important this season does not have his own song at all.
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 22 часа назад
@TekTheNinja Vox and Velvette are literally only here to sing some great songs then never appear again until the finale
@TekTheNinja
@TekTheNinja 13 часов назад
@@VelvetteSimp Exactly it feels like they're being set up as important for another season but for now they don't really do much.
@ab.6223
@ab.6223 23 часа назад
I'm honestly surprised to hear you like the show considering all its damning(ha) flaws, but with how severely you dress everything about the show's style down I cannot tell if that's true or you're just afraid of the annoying fans lmao.
@astorrhymemaster
@astorrhymemaster 22 часа назад
Good question 😵‍💫
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 22 часа назад
Some people can just look past the flaws and enjoy the show for what it is
@leshi97
@leshi97 18 часов назад
You know you can enjoy a thing and still critique it, right?
@wildstarfish3786
@wildstarfish3786 День назад
this one better have a chorus
@griffinbaker3509
@griffinbaker3509 День назад
I do see some of your points(And let's be real Episode three's song slots could have been better used), but I think some of your criticism is overly pedantic and a case of pretty standard critical dissonance. You're a lot more knowledgeable about song writing then most people which is usually a good thing but can also result in you caring about things the core audience doesn't.
@its_miscu
@its_miscu День назад
oh hey, was wondering if you'd cover HH as a very recent fan of the creator's shows (never really clicked with me until this year), the forced quirkiness of the musical segments was definitely one of the biggest hurdles to enjoying it and was probably one of the biggest problems that caused my friends to completely bounce off of it. they needed to ease off the 2 songs per episode goal-stick to the ones that they have time to polish *and* which meaningfully move the story along (Hell's Greatest Dad is a nice tune, but a total plot cul-de-sac) helluva boss has a better batting average since the songs usually only crop up when they're useful to the story
@somebody4952
@somebody4952 День назад
I personally really disagree with using "disrespectful" in place of "respectless". I personally don't see how the first word would be any less awkward than the first. Plus there are plenty of songs that use rare words, or even words that straight up don't exist
@-keanetan
@-keanetan День назад
As explained, no one really says the term “respectless” (heck even autocorrect agrees) and the point is this was used as the main hook of the song, so I highly doubt the same situation being common in “plenty of other songs”
@somebody4952
@somebody4952 23 часа назад
@@-keanetan supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
@leshi97
@leshi97 18 часов назад
Okay but that's really not a comparable comparison because that's a specifically long made up word and respectless is a really but infrequently used word that doesn't flow well
@theflamingphoenix
@theflamingphoenix День назад
THANK YOU!!!! There was always something about this song that pissed me off and you uncovered it! It DOES feel very forced and unnecessary, but it made my brain hurt too much so I never asked myself why. Anyway 10/10 video, and I pray that the hazbin fandom doesn't crucify you for speaking the truth
@tanjatomasevic3577
@tanjatomasevic3577 День назад
Where did the AL go to in your channel name? XD
@Lady_ETHNE
@Lady_ETHNE День назад
Oh my gosh thank you for doing this. I like the song for what it was but my problems started when I wrote a parody for it and tried to record myself singing it. The instrumental was my biggest problem because I got completely lost when I tried to sing it, which normally I just need to hear the instrumental for like 5 seconds to figure out where I’m at but I had to start from the beginning to figure it out, which I’ve never had to do for a song before. Also I didn’t change any line with “respectless,” in it, which proved to be my undoing because it was so awkward to sing. I’m probably going to have to shelf this project or at least rework it before trying again. Honestly the singers carried this song way more than the writers did. I’d love to see you do more videos from Hazbin like Loser baby or Hell’s greatest dad.
@pawnhearts8785
@pawnhearts8785 17 часов назад
"Loser, Baby" and "Poison" are easily the best written songs in the entire show.
@featherguardian6023
@featherguardian6023 День назад
This song is Catchy but it’s an Embarrassment to Disney Music.
@cysheep8261
@cysheep8261 День назад
I think all the hazbin songs are bad
@Phobie_2008
@Phobie_2008 23 часа назад
Insane take.
@VelvetteSimp
@VelvetteSimp 22 часа назад
Worst take on the show I've seen yet I feel like even the biggest hater will still say "oh yah but at least the songs are pretty good"
@pawnhearts8785
@pawnhearts8785 17 часов назад
Disagree with that, songs like "Poison" and "Loser, Baby" are very well-written and well-performed.
@NotAdriana03
@NotAdriana03 День назад
Surprising how this song is the second most listened to if we go off the official Amazon prime RU-vid channel- also the analysis you did was very good!
@polthedestroyer
@polthedestroyer День назад
I got here from your Poor Unfortunate Souls video. You're doing great! I'm learning a lot about the pop culture I grew up with. As a person who has to sit through a lot of musicals for work, your stuff is giving me a better vocabulary and a better appreciation of the genre. Keep it up!
@calebwashere
@calebwashere День назад
Respectless could've been a good song lyrically, but it feels like the writers were going for a "Hip wit da kidz" route
@heinoussage
@heinoussage День назад
you know how when the internet says a word so much that it lose any and all meaning "quriky" has become one those words
@cesar6447
@cesar6447 18 часов назад
Nah, quirky is the same meaning as always, a girly that tries to catch social media attention by using " relatable " gimmicks to the character, either cute clumsy girls or boss bitches
@almondtofuchan3157
@almondtofuchan3157 День назад
I only liked the song since it really reminded me of Don’t Lose Your Head from Six the musical, I really wonder if they took inspiration from that show?