just got your video recommended, and i don't know if that music was done with the feeling of finally accepting that someone is simply not meant to be with you but that is how i felt listening to it, really nostalgic, keep it up :) (sorry if i made a mistake writing this, english isn't my native language)
add reverb to your chords cos they sounds to dry and un \blended and I would check the mix on those. Love the kick but change the snare and the other percs could be switched or simplified good shit tho g