The track pitch does not match with your singing scale....A brotherly suggestion upload o lyrics after u get it approved by any mentor...if u don't have kindly find one for guidance...nevertheless less keep up your passion alive.
Dost, my gaane apne tareeke se gaata hoon. Mere gaane kisi ko pasand aate hain aur kisi ko nahi. 100% log mere gaane pasand karenge, aisa mera koi expectation nahi hai. Kuch log aise bhi hai jinko Rafi sahab ke gaane pasand nahi hai aur koi Kishore da ke gaane pasand nahi karta.