I liked it. 😂 I laughed at the end because I saw myself taken away from the scene still shaken from what I caused. It could have been a metaphor for my own life on a larger scale. 😂
As i can't program computers I think it would be so hard to get the readings of these stories as they should be which is a shame because I think we lose a lot because the accentuations are a lot of times in completely the wrong plac and as such we lose a lot in the retelling.
Nice story! But I kinda wished that the ending was different. If I may put in an add-on, here it is: History has a way of repeating itself, through some twist of fate, the Ghini technology did not completely die out & the throne found a way to reharness it's power. 1,000 years later, another clueless human sat down in the throne, this human, a lone young female archaeologist had become unwell & sent out a distress message. The same Ghini Commander (his species are long lived) 'answered', he would catch this defiler as he failed to do so 1,000 years earlier. But when he made his way to the throne this time he was in for a shock! This was not the 1 from years earlier, he demanded answers from the new human but seeing she was in some predicament he took her on board his ship. Waking up in the Medical Bay, the human girl sees the angry commander & he hurls his questions at her. "I DON'T KNOW! I'm just an Archaeologist, I only sat in that seat because I was ill." The Commander, angry though he was, could see she was telling the truth. "You do remember what the hologram told you, you could revive or destroy our Empire." The human, as far as she was concerned, did not want to lose an opportunity for a monumental discovery. Plus, as time went on, she began to have the hots for the Ghini Commander & he for her. On their Wedding Night, she makes a confession during their consummation, "An Ancestor of mine visited the Imperial Ruins 1,000 years earlier, the poor man was down on his luck & weary. He sat down on the throne & all hell broke loose." The Commander gawped at his human bride's confession, "So, you were on a pilgrimage too? 1 that your ancestor started?" "I suppose so." The bride answers & puts her arms around her husband's shoulders & pulls him into an embrace on the bed. 9 months later she gives birth, the Commander is bawling his eyes out from witnessing the blessed event & reveals a long kept secret, he is a direct descendant of the last Ghini Emperor & his family had fallen into decline. "You gave me hope, let that be our baby's name."
This is BS, this is only HALF the story, UNFINISHED !!! I came across 2 or 3 other of your stories and they ended the same way, only half of a story. I WILL NOT WATCH ANY MORE OF YOUR UNFINISHED STORIES !!! Either do it right or go find something else to do........................................
That flashing on the words is making it hard to read and is extremely distracting from your story My friend could not read it its very frustrating for every one watching it. I'll wait till you fix it
When you make a story, how come you always end it at the end very in?I don't know.I like your story but I don't understand why you have to imagine it in half an hour
These stories all have both a connection and a interesting lesson to learn. About the only story that I found gross was something with a spider like alien girl and a scientist where they hooked up and interfaces with a spaceship and Donald trump. Just kidding about DT.
Its a good story but I could not imagine a girl being a mechanic. It's about hard work and getting your hands dirty. That would mess up her hair, makeup and her nails. Most girls would throw a fit if they got that goo on their hands. Also I get the overall meaning of the story. This idea of setting things right seems to be everywhere.
