Good stuff up until :25 seconds I keep watching to see you get better... Flash os too intense Make the camera move slightly You do good with the slow parts but..when the beat picks up you have to bring the audience in. (still better than random action scenes just thrown all around)
Keep going. This isn't good, but you're trying. Try using blur, and fadeout more to go with the flow more Get rid of the subtitles they look tacky you can add black and white and old film grain to make the feal of an old memory (with the muffled sounding part) when the beat drops switch to colour using blur/blur and fade out from a higher contrast color/ increase the action and when she lowers her tempo or tone in her voice, slow the action when she heightens her tempo, increase the action Also, tone doen the flash...it's way too bright Great anime Great quality Great song choice Subpar editing
great song, great anime choice but this is as boring as a slide show When that beat drops you NEED TO KILL IT, but it was like a misfire from a 380..what hell happened?
