Really enjoyed this short film. The story was simple and easy to follow. I really enjoyed the actors performance in the film. It was nicely made and really enjoyed the short
This was fantastic except for the throw........he retracts his arm at the last moment and looks more like a pathetic drop then the rage filled throw it was building up to be. I really wonder what the thought process behind that was.
The acting is par EXCELLENCE!!! And the set design with its attention to scenery detail that is very retro, ala Buck Rogers with modern equipment, is on the level of cinematic artistry to the Nth Degree to say nothing of the writing and directing. Everyone involved should be proud of the end result that is a Sci- Fi MASTERPIECE!!! 😀👍👍👍👍👍
Ah yes, the old wheelnut problem, but in a spacecraft engine. Thing is, while a car needs four wheels to drive, a spacecraft will still move with even just one engine, so no idea why he was stopped. Which neatly brings me to the next problem. If your engines fail in space, you don't stop. You will just keep on going at the same speed you were going forever. I could go on, but these were the main problems with the scenario. Now as for the acting, I'm not sure what he's chewing here 07:15 , but he's making the exact same face I make when my sister cooks, and my mom forces me to act like it's delicious, to spare her feelings. It's torture, and sometimes I think she's just deliberately trying to poison me. Not sure why he's so upset, but I do know airplane food can be very bad, so I'll forgive him for that.
Someone has - entirely of their own volition - given us a free film to watch, should we choose to. They’ve written the script, planned it and executed it, before deciding to give it away for free. They’ve dedicated their time to finding a crew, an actor and the equipment required to shoot it, before gifting it to whomsoever should stumble across it on this platform. For free at that. And you decide to critique the most inane and petty point that I have ever read. Such anal retention is singularly pitiful, my friend. However, please let us know when your film is ready to be uploaded, Spielberg, and we’ll get the popcorn ready. I’m quite sure such devastating plot holes will have been squared away, given your obvious perfectionism.
🟦...SOooooo let me get this straight, according to YOUR rules; ANY-Body who notices ANY-thing that YOU DIDN'T (or didn't consider interesting enough to take note of) is being "Petty", "Inane" & "Anal Retentive". .... And of course, according to YOUR 'Rules', NO-ONE is allowed to criticize ANY-thing unless THEY can do it BETTER,.. which in itself is a WAY more ABSURD manner of 'Reasoning' than that entertained by the person you've been criticizing. .... Ahm jus' gonna hope that your 'Psychological Disorder' NEVER becomes PREVALENT In The REAL World. ....Smh. .... Thanx fer the LAUGH!
Great short, but the story lacks conflict. He has a desire( wants to stalk) but no conflict. What are the consequences of him being a stalker? Also don't put too much music, it feels like a videoclip, sometimes. I feel like this is a problem with filmmakers here on youtube, they put too much music, maybe diegetic sounds add more suspense. Anyway, great job on the cinematography. I feel like I'm being too critical, don't get mad, it's a great short, though.
Same here! I thought that, after successful engine repair journey, he came back and discovered he had left the cockpit keys inside. Anyway: very much enjoyed this one.
In most if not all cases, once a rocket reaches its cruising speed, the engines will shut off, and the rocket will go forward at that cruising speed practically indefinitely because spade is a vacuum for practical purposes. So videos that show exhuast coming out of the back of the rocking are nonsence except when the rocket is leaving earth (or a similar planet or asteroid, or when it need to speed up or maneuver.
YAY! Another pile of implausible cliches start to finish. I promise myself to stop hoping any of these sorts of videos will have any brains or even novelty.
...really??!! He f**ked up 20% of oxygen before started to think how to fix the situation? I doubt he is a pilot, rather teenager, that stole dad's ship for riding! Filmed well, actor's play is great, but the story is a shit...
I don't know anything about film making, but I really loved this! I've watched tons of short horror videos, but this is by far one of the best I've seen. The actors absolutely rocked! I just kept thinking, batter batter swing!! Take that monsters head off! Lol! Thanks for great little video. Wishing you both great success!
Like a constipated mathmatician, he eventually worked it out with a pen. How he ever got on a space programme with his aptitude for general ineptitude beggars belief and probably baffles science.
..., couldn't send a "MAYDAY" (or report to HQ!) via communications system? Wasted too much time, effort & energy getting in & out of space suit a couple times! That's not survival protocol! He should have had prior emergency, (plan "B"), training per such emergency scenarios!
I enjoyed this concept, drawing out & tricking the demon to expose itself. I just thought the monster itself should have been less visible. The tension & vibe worked great in the small room, & the actors did a great job of portraying the story. Cool job guys.
Very good. Loved i was waiting for something terrible to happen to him outside the cockpit. Only complaint the atmosphere didnt feel like he was in space.
I really liked the way this was filmed, the build-up of tension, etc. But, unless you’ve got a zillion dollar CGI budget, it’s almost always a mistake to show too much of the monster, as they did here. It was pretty silly-looking, which spoiled the mood. Didn’t like the fight scene, either. It was just .. wrong. I think the film should have been shorter, with a tighter plot. But it was very watchable, for all that.
I have to agree about the monster, unless you have incredible horror graphics then less is more, as once you show the monster the effect is lost. The footage you shot is great, but I'd go back to the editing room & remove the fully visible shots of the demon, our minds do a better job or creating terror when we only see hints of the creature. I do like the concept, so 10 out of 10 for the idea.
