Tbh I only remembered the drowning part, the rest of the story is made up, oops, no I didn't say that btw can you say something about the mix? aLSO THANKS FOR LISTENING AS ALWAYS <3
Sounds nice!! One thing I'd reccomend is adding more transitions (make the yourself or get them online!) Another thing is try to make the mix less muddy and go less dissonant with chords (I've always went by instinct but I have no idea how it is for other people so consider studying a bit of chord stuff?)
@@CJYoung1234 im doing an album called 'ANGEL SINGS' i can show u the structure demo for one of the tracks, and u see if u can contribute in any way, u in?
Fantastic job on this song!! :0 Though you might want to add side-chain to the bass since it took up lot of of the low frequencies (It sort of fought with the lows of the guitar at the start and the kick) Or you can make the bass take up less low frequency and make it a bit less louder Also 2 songs in 4 days??? That is fast! It usually takes 1 week for me to upload a song ;-;
Thank you 😁✨️and yeah, the bass is a not properly mixed, I'll have to fix it, thanks for the suggestion😌🔥 I'm kinda workaholic, so once I sit done, I work for hours sometimes, thus I was able to make 2 songs in 4 days🙃😂quite fast ryt?
@@CJYoung1234 Yeah making songs take quite a bit of time haha, one song I remember took me 3 weeks to compose and I returned to my channel rotting away 😭
I was so confused when I saw less then a thousand views for the quality and skill you have. This is actually so tuff keep going and you'll get that recognition you deserve 🙏🔥
Yoo, I like the melodies present here. It's chill ✨ Also, the beginning made me think of Kensuke Ushio for some reason(I love his ping pong sound track alot) 🤔
Thanks man for listening✨️😭💗do consider subscribing (p.s. I just checked out kensuke ushio, ping pong song, I liked it too) thnx 4 the indirect recommendation😎👍🏻
Very cool love the vibe to it you created and described feeling into music, very well cool music! 👍 And I am sure this will be reality one day rooting for ya, keep going.
Wow, what a piece of creation! Beautiful! That part, when you enter the stage, got me imagining that Im entering a lively green garden. 2nd imagination: A happy ending scene of a movie or animation series episode. Keep on working on your craft, you are doing great. One day you will reach your goal 👍
Thank you so much for listening 😌❤️so glad my music was able to give you such beautiful imagination to you, do subscribe, one spoiler for you, I'm dropping another video tonight, do check that out too
This is beautiful! The music ties in perfectly with the visual you described! Keep doing what you're doing, and I hope your first stage performance can go as you imagined it!
this is fye bro it holds love in it this is why i prefer undergound people sometimes, it's just pure creativity, nobody is trying to met any expectations, just freely letting creativity play, and this is what makes the best pieces. This is fye bro keep it up man!
Thanks😭🫂💖you dont know how much ur comments means to me❤thanku thanku thanku for listening😭🍻and do consider subscribing, won't wanna miss ur beautiful reviews on my musics henceforth😌
This sounds pretty nice :0 I think the piano is a bit unbalanced stereo-wise and has a bit much attack but that might just be me Other than that it is well rounded!! Keep it up!!
@@CJYoung1234 No problem!! Continue on your musical journey :0 I can't wait to see what you will be making in the future!! (also thank you for the notification you sent me in the previous chat for this video haha)
@@GemHavenMusics Hey thanks again, do consider subscribing so that you won't miss out the next time I put out new music, your reviews and comments means a lot to me, thanks again GemsHavenMusics😄❤
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