Hey author❤ Do read this Firstly, your writing skills are amazing man! This was one of the finest ff I've ever read. That's why I tried something tho it's not as good as yours,do comment your thoughts. BROKEN HEALER There she was, Standing at the edge, Looking at the clear water; Cursing her so called privilege. Was she admiring the nature? Oh! That would be the last thing she'd do, You won't understand, Until you put yourself in her shoe. How it feels like to be a burden, How it feels being so unworthy, A world where she was caged-- Without an ounce of sympathy. And when she thought she finally found the one Who found her worthy in his eyes; Only if she knew-- He was a devil in disguise. That's it! She can't do it anymore. She wasn't a coward to run away, But this world isn't worth living for. She thought of ending everything And escape from this hell-hole, Being punished for merely existing-- Is now crushing her soul. But as she was about to step, On the path to her ecstasy, She felt someone Pulling her far from her fantasy. Ther he was-- A stranger. When her very "own" people denied, Who was he to save her? He said nothing; Just held her wrist. He pulled her in his embrace, And that's when her eyes got caught in a mist. He provided her the comfort-- Which she never knew existed, And when he smiled; She swore her heart melted. His smile was comforting. It was just- graceful. Yet something seemed off about them, It was broken, but beautiful. He didn't consider her as a burden, Unlike how others used to feel; Instead he believed that, Her scars deserved to heal. He became her healer, He became her cure, He taught her to fight till the end; No matter how much is there to endure But little did she know, He was his own killer, That her cure actually was -- A Broken Healer. ❤
THIS.... This is the reason why I freaking hate the word love. People do describe it beautifully with fancy names and what more. Even in reality... people do choose someone else over themselves. In the name of Love, of course. But what we get in the end... breaking self of ourselves into millions apart. Is it fair enough? Where were we wrong???? What made us like this???? Can someone answer??? Does breaking up and moving forward and falling all over again easy? Why can't we see till the end? I'm sorry! I'm replying after 2 years of publishing this story. This was on my watch later that I saved to read later. Recently, it plopped on my home page again, and I played it. It kept on my history, not continuing for days now. But today I did. And now I'm questioning: Is this the reason why I couldn't compose myself to read this for days now? Is it the reason why I always get distracted when I decide to read this? I knew when I started this last part that this would be a sad ending. Still... I chose to continue. Why? I don't know! But does he actually deserve this pain? He went through a lot. After suffering alone, they got together. Why can't they be there for each other till the end? It's just a matter of 2 years, right? Why do BOTH have to suffer ALONE........ Most importantly... WHY YN LIED TO HIM? WHAT'S THE REASON! YOU CAN'T JUST BE A CLIFFHANGER AUTHOR. I'M CRYING HERE. I'M TOO OVERWHELMED TO HANDLE MYSELF, THAT TOO BECUASE OF A DAMN STORY! You had replied to one of the comments that you'll make a bonus part. Where is that? Not to mention, you end it, "it's not the end until it's happy". So???? Where is the rest???? I'm sorry if I'm asking a lot, that too fois r a 2 year ago story. Please let them have a happy life on their own. Which they both deserve... Please.... I beg You! Edited: Damn i have wrote a lot. Guess I poured my every emotion into this comment. I'm actually a rare commenting reader. Sorry btw!
I would marry you if you were a guy i swear i would have the best husband who has pick up lines every day for me and i would fall more in love with you every passing second❤❤💜💜
I love this ff💞💞😭😭 I love the story line, it’s so good I didn’t expect that Taehyung is dead but I’m happy that he helped y/n, without him she wouldn’t have survived. I also love the music which you used This is the best ff I’ve ever read💞💞😭😭😭😭
It's ok to push people away when all u see is your goal. It gets hard when it's come to solitary, to live alone, to handle everything alone. Things get uneasy, people rush to you for YOU being serious in life. Not every time but sometimes you have to look forward for your own benefit and it's completely right to leave people on their own. If you feel like running away from life and everyone you know, don't be worried, it will take some time to heal, this is what human nature is about. You portrayed very well. Things like this are getting avoided. Your presentation can be seen approval in those two broken souls who are neglecting each other.
Your words OH MY GOD It's not like reading an ff But it's like reading a page of ROMANCE NOVEL FROM THE 1900's LIKE U RLLY HAVE A GOOD FUTURE AS AN AUTHOR
OH MAH GAWD, the way you choose your words make reading this feel so ethereal and im just outta words, UR WRTING DESERVES AN OSCAR and im not even exaggerating <333 But can you make a oneshot on this "when you get insecure after watching the Love Wins All MV'' but make tae a romantic kinda husbandd.. Thenkss<33
My heart melted in this one❤ Although you do it everytime with your ffs... Thankuu so much for posting dear you make the best oneshots in the whole universe❤ They're just so calm & serene & fluffy & lovely You've my heart dear 💕 Hope you're doing fine Take care
I have a question ? " That , why Jimin couldn't go back because if he died by an accident why his soul was wondering l mean l am curious btw l appreciate your work it's really a heart touching story
Simply heart warming. You always use the right words, the balance between physical affection and dialogues just beautiful. The details about him being an introvert as well, it just fit so well.
Honestly , when you step away from your people to follow your dreams then you're already a warrior because you're are not gonna give up even if it hurts you
