Its nice but please can you do the movie make more disstressing ? Its made to quick in the movie for ZENtangle...... Thank you for notice. I was a yogateacher . Now in my 70ies. Like drawing and painting , art and ZEN tangle.
My first thought is I think I'd do the umbrella upside direction. My second thought, which is not as spontaneous, and is more philosophical than artistic, as I am not an artist, is that you should consider that you are looking at this looking down, as your mind is in flight unless you've grounded iT. You could take a section with a lot of bare paper and just use a darker color to reduce openness.
