umm... for someone who's just seen his friend get "killed" by something, let's say.. a zombie... you sound really calm.... better acting required- watch more zombie movies, learn a thing or two..
Seems a habitual flaw, every time DUDES fake a horrific scene, they toss out, "Oh my God!", replacing the natural outbursts like, "Shit!" When confronted by REAL zombies or aliens, we don't blurt out NON offensive lines like "Oh my God" unless we think Grandma and Grandpa might be viewing the footage later! Just a tip!
The zombie looked real but your buddie who was bit would reanimate that quick heres the stages 1-3 hours brown round the bite wound 3-5 hours numbness near wound 6-8 hours numbness in lower body 8-12 hours overall numbness 12-18 hours paralasis 20 hours classified as dead 23 hours reanimation
lol dude read more about the body and what happens to your body when you die yes the body does stiffen when you die but not like that it takes time for it to stiffen to the point of barly moving a.k.a walking slow and eve trying to run but slow so really it depends how long the body has been dead
Also The body's blood was on the carpet...the y's after bod denotes posession or ownership, the blood was the body's. But when trying to denote a plural state as in more than one, you would need to write BODIES.
If that were a real zombie first of all the zombie couldn't move that fast your,friend couldn't turn into a zombie that fast,and the zombie wouldn't have the power to open the door while you were holding it.
if that were a real attack you'd be all sweaty and catching your breath.. You'd be breathing hard nd not that calm.. you talk about your friend being attacked by a zombie like nothing really happened.. Constructive Criticism dude.. For your future productions =).. Nice concept though like the real thing
In a zombie thing like that i would be able to steady the camera much better than that guy did. He purposely did that because the zombies probably looked like normal people, and if something like that did happen where are the zombies now, if the cops found the video and no bodies? lol