I’m cliqued up like Xhosa This beat a roller coaster Catch it at the apex this the hero’s journey Brain freeze reached my neck the flow must be a slurpee Not adorned in ice but the icee in my veins I’m no longer playing nice crises deep inside my brain The metabolic stress I impress Dont flex I digress Lovis cooking beats Made me to go to the kitchen I guess Hardly write anymore but inspiration struck a nerve Other writers couldn’t pass the test even I gave a 100 point curve Fire as hell man.
if you took this same thing and quitened down most things and cut a few it would sound beautiful but rn u can barely hear the rythym. less is more keep going awesome ideas
Agree with this. I think it’s absolutely got potential. Think most of the percussion could be stripped down and instead you let the bass carry the rhythm. Right now it’s hard to map a “jump-in” point. Keep working though. Also agree with OP, the ideas are really strong. 💪
