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@winlex247banjo7
@winlex247banjo7 7 дней назад
I'm gonna cry 😢
@brutalface4052
@brutalface4052 2 месяца назад
I’m gladdddd u did this one❤❤❤ 21:29
@brutalface4052
@brutalface4052 2 месяца назад
Ok but can we just appreciate how Zendeya slayed with dis song❤ 2:18
@brutalface4052
@brutalface4052 2 месяца назад
Ok even if it’s a dance they did this technically twice friends don’t do that😂 2:35
@brutalface4052
@brutalface4052 2 месяца назад
Nah cus friends don’t look at each other like that and the lip bite 1:14
@user-gn4rx4cn6c
@user-gn4rx4cn6c 3 месяца назад
this is the best ending
@user-tv6sg9gz4o
@user-tv6sg9gz4o 4 месяца назад
OMG I CRIED WHEN THEY TOLD THEIR STORY BOUT THEIR PARENTS DEATH😢 this story DEFINITELY DESERVES PART 2❤❤
@user-xx5mt2ov4v
@user-xx5mt2ov4v 4 месяца назад
SOY TU FAN😢😊😊
@user-xx5mt2ov4v
@user-xx5mt2ov4v 4 месяца назад
CUANDO ARAS MAS CHOR 😢
@hazel.1601
@hazel.1601 6 месяцев назад
Oh my god this gave me goosebumps
@hazel.1601
@hazel.1601 6 месяцев назад
Oh my god !! It was so good
@blinkobv
@blinkobv 7 месяцев назад
Nice ending 😂
@user-mz7xg5bx8e
@user-mz7xg5bx8e 7 месяцев назад
Bonus pleaseeee
@user-mz7xg5bx8e
@user-mz7xg5bx8e 7 месяцев назад
Bonus heh3❤
@ChanandlerBong00
@ChanandlerBong00 10 месяцев назад
Wow thank you for this masterpiece 🙌🏻
@btspavedtheway-t3h
@btspavedtheway-t3h 11 месяцев назад
O my gosh the screams in the beginning made me shiver 😮
@LalisaManofoot9697
@LalisaManofoot9697 11 месяцев назад
Thank you authorimn it's cool i like the ending❤❤
@JenEgwalan-fq7xo
@JenEgwalan-fq7xo Год назад
Ang ganda nung isa yung hindi nakatali ang buhok
@zainzainulhaq4080
@zainzainulhaq4080 Год назад
Jenlisa💋💋❤
@user-mz7xg5bx8e
@user-mz7xg5bx8e Год назад
Bonus pleaseee Author❤❤🥺
@mardelizara777
@mardelizara777 Год назад
8:53 Good Jennie😍yougotthis hope Lisa can change after you talk like this. Yes, you are right that fame is temporary, nothing lasts forever😇 Lisa, your mistake is that the way you approached Jennie was not right. That's why Jennie hates your attitude (even though at first Jennie saw you, she liked you), but because of your selfish and arrogant attitude that makes Jennie hate you even more. Lisa Lisa😮‍💨 10:39 Lisa's attitude should have been softer from the start so that Jennie doesn't hate your arrogant attitude, Lisa. Your treatment was wrong from the start, but after you were slapped by Jennie and kai approached Jennie, then you realized it all🥴😮‍💨 16:05 Because of Jennie's slap, Lisa changed🤭😁 Lisa Lisa, it looks like someone has to slap you, after that you will realize🤪But only Jennie dared to fight you at that time, Lisa😁😂 19:37 But his way was still wrong at first, Why didn't anyone tell Jennie from the start (how was the condition of the campus), from there it was blame😒 Especially when Jennie was a new student at that campus. Naturally, if Jennie thought Lisa was an arrogant and selfish person because she treated Jennie like that😬 If we were in Jennie's position, then we would also think like that, because Lisa's initial attitude had no ethics at all😮‍💨
@mardelizara777
@mardelizara777 Год назад
3:33 Why could Lisa be that rude to Jennie?😢 doesn't Lisa like Jennie, then why isn't her attitude that soft towards Jennie? I feel sorry for Jennie😢 why does it have to be Jennie who always suffers every JenLisa fanfiction story?😓 Almost all of JenLisa's fanfiction accounts always make Jennie's character weak, suffering, jealous and possessive. Can't you make Jennie's character bolder, less possessive but caring? And make Lisa's character gentle and caring🥺 4:03 Didn't Tzuyu and Somi bully Jennie earlier?😒 they always annoy jennie😡😤 4:15 I hope Jennie can change the campus for the better🥺 and Lisa's father defends Jennie over Lisa. I hope so, so that Lisa doesn't go around using her father's name on campus😒 5:41 Lisa is very arrogant😒 does as she pleases. Don't like Lisa's character like this, like not being educated while on campus because of her arbitrary behavior because her father ruled the campus. Only relying on her father's name alone, Lisa seemed to dare to do rough things on campus🤦‍♀ 8:35 Stupid Lisa, she even asked "what's your problem?" to Jenny🤣🤣🤪 Does Lisa not realize what she has done all this time to Jennie. Lisa is too arrogant that she forgets herself because of her behavior which has absolutely no ethics at all. Lisa's character here is arrogant, selfish, messy, uneducated, smoker, pretentiously handsome😪😴 Gosh like there is nothing good in him in this story. OMG LISA🤦‍♀😮‍💨
@RishmyMariyam-de3vr
@RishmyMariyam-de3vr Год назад
Like it, Love it
@haelcayanan4884
@haelcayanan4884 Год назад
Thanks
@mardelizara777
@mardelizara777 Год назад
4:41 As soft-hearted as this😍 no one will think that Jennie is a murderer😅 gosh if I were in Lisa's position, I definitely don't think that Jennie is evil😅 because her treatment alone is very good😇 There must be a reason for killing someone. This is what makes Jennie a psychopath because she wants to avenge her parents. But her innocent children became victims of Jennie's crimes🥺 this is very sad😭😭😭 14:57 This is what makes a child a psychopath🥺 revenge for a child because his parents were killed😢 this really makes me cry😭😭😭😭😭 poor Jennie😭😭😭 17:09 If Jennie's parents were still alive. It's impossible for Jennie to commit murder🤣🤣🤣because Jennie's parents died because of their parents, that's what made Jennie a serial killer. But after the job was done (manoban was the last target #23) and that was Jennie's job done. But Lisa is a detective😊 2:01 Love can make people crazy right😅 ( what Lisa did was a crime, for releasing serial killers🤭😁 ) but love can conquer all😍😍😍 after this JenLisa will live happily ever after🥰🥰🥰
@jenlise
@jenlise Год назад
Jungkook: *saw him died* broo wake up tell me eho killed you then you can die again 💀😂
@kristal7129
@kristal7129 Год назад
can I ask what the name of the song 16:4
@HannaMarieZulueta-mi3ck
@HannaMarieZulueta-mi3ck Год назад
heyyy why did u add a ghost in the story😂
@jameelacomon7874
@jameelacomon7874 Год назад
hahaah really nice and cute...
@bluebaconsays
@bluebaconsays Год назад
One of the best bonus ending. ❤❤ 😊
@jameelacomon7874
@jameelacomon7874 Год назад
Hhahaha
@deathherotamil5796
@deathherotamil5796 Год назад
1:12 I'm going crazy
@datusaililajimlano97
@datusaililajimlano97 Год назад
Panget nga lang uniform nila
@datusaililajimlano97
@datusaililajimlano97 Год назад
I like the sound
@P3arls..
@P3arls.. Год назад
'Every boy and girl she dates, disappears without a trace'
@danielapigo3900
@danielapigo3900 Год назад
U make me cry.🥺
@rickyliboon8598
@rickyliboon8598 Год назад
Buset Kala ko tapos na hahahaha
@sunitadifusa2756
@sunitadifusa2756 Год назад
Ooooo 🥰🥰🥰
@Daineth10
@Daineth10 Год назад
What names on two girl
@agnesguillermo9682
@agnesguillermo9682 Год назад
Thanks author
@MsAchel
@MsAchel Год назад
I'm sorry about the grammar .. Also the mistake .. "Tzuyu and Megan are Cousin" 💙
@nielpino8972
@nielpino8972 Год назад
Update me next jenlisaff please
@travelers80
@travelers80 Год назад
Nice story 👍
@jewelurbano2209
@jewelurbano2209 Год назад
Thanks author 🌼❤️❤️
@rexieluna1735
@rexieluna1735 Год назад
Wow author...you did it again...i wish to read more story with sense....thank you...hoping there will be another story like that...be safe
@MsAchel
@MsAchel Год назад
Thank you 🥺 Don't worry I'll try my best to upload even tho I'm busy always 💙 Stay safe 💙
@Cwintv
@Cwintv Год назад
@bliksarangblkpik285
@bliksarangblkpik285 Год назад
I am at 13:29 and now I am thinking that this can be a prank by author or this can be a drama
@greenhill9964
@greenhill9964 Год назад
No bonus?