Hey there, I am currently making a RPG game and would like to use this audio. It does say free BGM in the description, but I just wanted to confirm with you if it's ok to use it. Credits will include your channel name, and the song title.
My dear friend Schwarze Black - when I saw the image of the grave yard in your video, I expected to hear dark sounds. Dark music. Something that relates to when you walk into a cemetery. Instead, I hear something the opposite. It dose not make any sense at all. The music is nice. I like it. Perhaps you can produce an image of something that is . . . cute? Something that reminds somebody of happier times - but the image of the graveyard does not match up with this music. If you have the chance, please take a look at my channel here on YT and you will see what I mean. Or, take a look at one of my faves, "Iron Cthulhu Apocalypse" and you'll see what I mean. You may want to take another direction when you compose your music. Another thing is your Description. Get RID of those, "I love Death, black metal, Insane, fetish" words - it is NOT working for you at all. Please do not use the word "death" in your Description or music - we all know we will see it in the end - but we don't need to be reminded into our every day of our lives. My advice: go for a walk in the park or in the woods and let nature teach you the ways of life. Open your mind and take the road in which was never taken - you can do it. I have faith in you. Take care.
Nintendo/Commodore 64 music :)! 8bit! Hey! Maybe I should ask my friends if they still have their consoles?? I still have my Playstation 2. Works great after 24 years :)!
The cool riffs are great! Why does it have to repeat for 30 minutes? Is there any way you can continue with different tracks to match it? You know - like a real rock album? Try editing your tracks and ADD something that will blow people's mind. Otherwise it sounds okay :) P.S. Those Asian "Gothic" girl pictures does not work. Look for pictures that MATCHES your music rather than something that does NOT match. Take it from me: using pictures of Asian girls do not work in music unless you are making music from the movie, "Blade Runner." It's okay to copy some of the music - I use it myself - and so did many composers since Mozart, Beethoven times. I don't really copy it - I imitate it. It still works. But I do compose my original material. Hope this helps you. You have talent. Expand, dude. Expand. All the Best :)
Thanks again for listening! I will upload a shorter version sometime soon! And a compilation of it! I always appreciate your valuable input. In my country, gothic is sometimes called visual-kei. They are what I imagine them to be. Your senses are very interesting and thought-provoking. You will help me to better and sharpen my senses!
@@schwarze_black You're welcome schwarze :) You know - I'm not trying to be like a "mean" teacher or anything like that. I like your music and I think you have potential. I'm not a professional musician and, like yourself, I learn as I go and discover new sounds for my music/video projects. I figured the best way to move forward is to learn from other musicians. I'm looking forward to a compilation - take your time :)
Very nice track :) However - 29 minutes of the same beat and rhythm is, in my opinion a bit too long. I lost interest in the first minute or so. But don't worry - it happened to me a few years back. So I had to do something about it. May I suggest: Keep the first minute or so as an introduction then blend it in with another track that will complement the intro. The second track might last for about 2 minutes in which it should be a "climax." End it with a whimper or a bang, depending on which track you use for the second one. In total - there should be 3 separate tracks that will tell a story. Don't drag it out for 30 minutes unless you want to include other tracks. Think of it like a movie where you have the intro to the characters, the climax and either a bitter end or a memorable one where they ride off into the Sunset. People usually remember the ending part because that is what any story or music is all about. If you want to see what I mean, check out Cryo Chamber here on RU-vid. There, you will find SEVERAL complete albums with a storylines and I'm very sure you will find a few tunes to inspire you to take a different turn regarding your own personal tastes in music. You have the equipment and know-how. Look and explore. You'll be surprised at what you will find :) Cheers :)
Thanks for everything! In my country, some people prefer to make long edits, called "working tracks", where one song is repeated over and over again. I'm planning to edit a large number of songs again soon to make it look like an album, so I'll take your opinion into account then:)
@@schwarze_black Thank you schwarze :) I was just trying to help out and give you advice in case you might like to change things around a bit. I like your music. I thought of changing things might help. Looking forward to your next project. Have fun :)
@@schwarze_black I read these "vintage" Gothic novels from the 60s-70s and they are really good stories. I remember when I was young, my Mom and Grandmother took me out shopping with them and I saw all these Gothic novels on book racks. I was more interested in reading about space stuff. Now, I look back and found these books again in some second hand book stores - cheap price too! Listening to your music is nice when I read a Gothic novel :) Thanks :)!
Thanks for listening! I'm so glad you liked it. I composed and played it. I write gloomy and dark songs, so please listen to my other songs if you like!
@@schwarze_black Thank you schwarze :) I am very happy to hear that. I do the same :) I also create my own videos to match my music. I see that you have 3 Subscribers . . . . You now have 4 :)!
