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@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 День назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, At the start there is no “the” before “Israeli“. And it is “shot and */severely/* injured” in the Hamburg story. And in the last story it is “ */Princes/* George */and/* Louis”, and you spell Charlotte wrong. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi День назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Geeta GuruMurthy from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The Israeli government says that a limited tactical pause by the military in activity around a southern Gaza route to allow more aid in is continuing. The main UN aid agency says this is yet to make any practical difference. It comes as Benjamin Netanyahu disbands his war cabinet set up five days after the beginning of the war with Hamas in October. ◇ Greek coastguard under scrutiny: The Greek coastguard has caused the death of dozens of migrants in the Mediterranean over a three-year period, witnesses say, including nine people who were deliberately thrown into the water. ◇ Ukraine War: We report from the city of Odessa as the Ukrainian army struggles to recruit soldiers two years into the war. ◇ Euro 2024: And we look ahead to today’s Euro 2024 matches where Ukraine takes on Rumania in their first group stage game.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 2 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Schiller from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The Israeli military is to observe an hours-long pause in military activity along a road in southern Gaza to allow for the delivery of much-needed aid. But the military emphasize that there is no ceasefire and combat would continue in Rafah. ◇ Ukraine peace summit: A peace summit on Ukraine has closed with dozens of world leaders acknowledging that dialogue between Russia and Ukraine would be necessary to agree a lasting peace settlement. Russia was not invited to the two-day summit, which took place in Switzerland. ◇ Euro ’24: Man with axe shot A man wielding an axe has been shot and seriously injured by police in Hamburg near a Euro 2024 fan zone. The incident took place as the city prepares to host the match between Poland and the Netherlands. ◇ Royal Father’s Day: And Prince George, Louis and Princess Charrette pay tribute to Prince William on Father’s Day, posting a picture taken by their mother on social media. Get more on all those stories on the BBC News website.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 3 дня назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, In the first story it goes “the Princes */said/* she’s making good progress”. That’s all for this video. Good job and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 3 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lauren Taylor from the BBC: ◇ Kate health update: The Princess of Wales is to make her first appearance of the year after her cancer diagnosis. She’ll take part in the annual Trooping the Colour parade. In a message, the Princess says she is making good progress but is not yet out of the woods. ◇ South Africa coalition: Cyril Ramaphosa is re-elected President of South Africa after his party strikes an historic coalition deal with opposition parties. In his victory speech, he said that South African people expected the coalition to work together to tackle poverty, unemployment and inequality. ◇ Ukraine peace summit: President Volodymyr Zelensky is joining dozens of world leaders in Switzerland for a summit on how to achieve peace in Ukraine. The two days of talks are aimed at establishing the first tentative basic principles to end the conflict. But Russia was not invited. ◇ Scotland’s Euro defeat: And in football, a disappointing night for Scotland as they are thrashed 5-1 by host Germany in the opening game of the Euros.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 3 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Cathaline Byaruhanga from the BBC: ◇ G7 leaders’ summit: The G7 turns its attention to China on the second day of the leaders’ summit in Italy. ◇ Euro 2024: They’re finally here. The Euros kick off today in Germany. ◇ Elephant’s miracle twins: And a miracle for an Asian elephant in Thailand who’s given birth to a rare set of twins.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 3 дня назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, In the second story the reporter says “the Euros” plural. I don’t know anything about soccer so I don’t know why it’s plural but that’s what she said. That’s all. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 2 дня назад
おはようございます, Hillary, I have confimred "Euro" with "s" after listened to this story again this morning. ありがとうございます! Have nice and enjoyable day in advance today.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 3 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Martine Croxall from the BBC: ◇ G7 Summit in Italy: G7 leaders are in Italy, where they are likely to approve a plan to use frozen Russian assets to fund Ukraine’s defense. ◇ Musk’s record pay day: Tesla’s board is set to ask shareholders to give boss Elon Musk the biggest pay deal in corporate history. ◇ Longitude Prize tackles superbugs: A decade-long competition to find new ways to tackle superbugs has been won by a test that rapidly determines if an infection is caused by bacteria and identifies the right antibiotics to fight it.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 3 дня назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, It starts off with “G7 leaders */are/* in Italy … approve */a plan/* to use…”. That’s all for today. Good job and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 2 дня назад
Good morning, Hillary, I have confinrmed both "are" and "a plan" after I checked them by using my recorder, which I have used for almost 12 years. ありがとうございます! Have a nice day today too.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 4 дня назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu You misspelled ‘international’ in the third story about Ukraine. And in Hunter Biden’s story it goes “believes his case went */well/*”. That’s all. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 4 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Martine Croxall from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Hamas gives its first official response to a US-backed peace plan, saying it views it favorably but wants Israel to commit to a permanent ceasefire. It comes as UN investigators say both Israel and Hamas have committed war crimes since the October 7th attacks. ◇ Rise in dengue fever: An invasive mosquito species is linked to a rise in dengue fever in Europe. ◇ Teens without smartphones: And how long could you last without your martphone? We meet the teenagers swapping theirs for a brick phone for five long days.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 4 дня назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, There is no ‘the’ in “it comes as *//* UN investigators…”. And in the last story it is “could you last without */your/* smartphone”. So, two mistakes. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 3 дня назад
こんばんは, Hillary, I have noted well two mistakes you raised up for me. ありがとうございます! Have an enough sleepy to recover yourself well.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 4 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Schiller from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: A vote for peace, the US ambassador to the United Nations welcomes a Security Council resolution backing a ceasefire plan for Gaza. ◇ Hong Kong judge row: Hong Kong’s government condemns a British judge who resigned the Chinese’s top court after 14 pro-democracy activists were found guilty of subversion. ◇ Rebuilding Ukraine: This is the scene live in Berlin where President Zelensky is at an internation donor conference to help rebuild Ukraine. ◇ Hunter Biden trial: Hunter Biden tells the BBC he believes his case went as jurors start deliberating the President’s son’s trial. ◇ Apple brings AI to Siri: Apple unveils new plans to integrate artificial intelligence into its products. ◇ Call me by your elephant name: And scientists have discovered that unlike other animals, elephants call each other by their name.
@hans-jochimkimann1488
@hans-jochimkimann1488 7 дней назад
Wie bei RBB das Geld auf Steuerzahler muß ras
@hans-jochimkimann1488
@hans-jochimkimann1488 7 дней назад
Guten Abend Freund Ja das kune wir vom RBB Das Geld der Steuerabzuler muß raus
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 8 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Christian Fraser & Nicky Schiller from the BBC: ◇ Macron calls election: Schock in France as President Macron announces a snap parliamentary election after losing the far-right in Sunday’s European polls. We have reaction live from Paris as the National Rally announces Jordan Bardella as their candidate for prime minister. ◇ EU Parliament elections: There has been a surge in support for the nationalist parties in the elections across the EU. The chief of the European Commission says her center-right alliance will serve as a bastion against extremists of left and right. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: America’s top diplomat, Antony Blinken, arrives in Cairo for his 8th tour of the Middle East since October in a further attempt to boost support for a ceasefire in Gaza. It comes as the Israeli war cabinet minister Benny Gantz pulls his party out of the government, accusing Prime Minister Benjamine Netanyahu of making empty promises over the conflict.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 6 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, You misspelled shock at the start and it is "/*We'll*/ have reaction live...". In the second story, there is no 'the' in "nationalist parties in *//* elections across the EU" and there is a 'the' in "against */the extremes/* of left and right". And in the last story there is no 'the' in "Benny Gantz pulls his party out of *//* government", and you misspelled the president's first name, Benjamin. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 5 дней назад
こんばんは, Hillary, While listening to this stories again, I have noted well nine mistakes you tought me yesterday. ありがとうございます! Have a good and enough sleep to recover yourself well tonight as well.
@joshuajoby6204
@joshuajoby6204 8 дней назад
First
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 9 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Cathaline Byaruhanga from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Israel has been criticized by a senior EU official over the killing of dozens of Palestinians in an operation to rescue hostages in Gaza. Yesterday, Jesep Borrell welcomed the freeing of the hostages but described as appalling reports of what he called another massacre of civilians. Anti-government protesters in Israel have crashed with police as rallies are held across the country to call for early elections and a deal to secure the release of remaining Israeli hostages held by Hamas. Police made more than 30 arrests and used water cannons to disperse the crowds. ◇ Europe votes: Voting is taking place in 21 European Union member states on the fourth and final day of elections to the European Parliament. The elections are forecast to see a surge in right and far-right representatives.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 8 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, The first sentence ends with “in Gaza yesterday“. It is “as rallies */were/* held” and there is a “the “before “Israeli hostages held by her mask”. And it is a singular “water cannon“. Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 9 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Martine Croxall from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: A row is intensifying between Israel and the United Nations after the UN added the country’s military to a list of entities committing violations against children alongside Hamas. Israel’s UN envoy leaked to the new a week before the list was represented to the Security Council. ◇ BBC election debate: Britain’s second televised election debate has brought more criticism of Prime Minister Rishi Sunak for leaving the D-Day commemorations early on Thursday. A Conservative Party spokeswoman said the move was wrong. ◇ Taylor Swift Eras tour: Taylor Swift has performed for tens of thousands of fans in Edinburgh in the first UK show of The Eras Tour. It’s the first time the US mega star has toured Scotland since 2015.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 8 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, Today’s mistakes are “Israel’s UN envoy leaked */the news/* a week…” and “was */to be presented/* …”. Good job and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 7 дней назад
おはようございます, Hillary, I am moving to Tokyo from Nagoya by a bullet train so-called Shinkansen, 新幹線 in Japanes, after completing a business trip to there. Yes, I have noted well two miskates you toughted me below. ありがとうございます! Have a nice day in advance today as well.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 10 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Azadeh Moshiri from the BBC: ◇ Zelensky in France: Ukraine’s president Zelensky addresses the French National Assembly as he seeks to rally Western support to resist Russia’s invasion. These are live pictures from Paris. ◇ Trump’s post-trial rally: Donald Trump makes his first campaign appearance since his fraud conviction, condemning the case again him as well as President Biden. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: America urges Israel to be transparent over the Gaza school strike. ◇ Tylor Swift Tour: And the day Tylor Swift fans in the UK have been waiting for: the pop star's Eras Tour is finally here and kicks off in Edinburgh.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 8 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, The mistakes are in the last Taylor Swift story. It goes “And the */day Taylor Swift/* fans … waiting for*/:/* the pop */star’s Eras/* Tour is finally *here*”. Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 7 дней назад
Dear Hllary, Hotesly, I tell you I have just understood this very compricated last sentece and its structure after following your comment. ありがとうございます! Have a nice and safe day as I wish you at any time.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 11 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Matthew Amroliwala from the BBC: ◇ D-Day anniversary: World leaders and veterans mark the 80th anniversary of D-Day. These are the pictures live as Ukrainian Volodymyr Zelensky arrives and is greeted by Emmanuel Macron. Joe Biden addresses veterans at the American cemetery in Normandy, reaffirming US support for Ukraine. The United States and NATO and a coalition of more than 50 countries standing strong with Ukraine. We will not work away. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: In other news, reports dozens have been killed in an Israeli strike on a UN school in central Gaza which the UN says housed 6,000 displaced. ◇ European elections: And the Netherlands kicks off European Parliament elections which are expected to see an upsurge in support for the far-right.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 11 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lucy Hockings from the BBC: ◇ India election: Narendra Modi’s BJP Party is working to form a new government after it fails to win an outright majority. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: We’ll hear from rescue workers who say they’ve found mass graves in the ruins of Gaza’s Al-Shifa Hospital. ◇ Sextortion awareness campaign: A mother whose son killed himself after being targeted by sextortion scammers is campaigning to raise awareness. ◇ Spitfire fighter: And this is the legendary Spitfire that helped turn the tide of WWII. We’ll remember its role.
@JxrgeTV
@JxrgeTV 11 дней назад
A day after the new look. launched in 2019
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 14 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Samanta Simmonds from the BBC: ◇ India election counting: Early results in India’s election are in. Narendra Modi is expected to win a third term but without the landslide he’d hoped for. ◇ Heatwaves in India: The country’s experiencing unprecedented heatwaves with temperatures surpassing 50C in the capital. ◇ 35th Anniversary Tiananmen Square: China cracks down on attempts to mark the 35th anniversary of the Tiananmen Square massacre. ◇ UK general election in 2024: Rishi Sunak and Sir Keir Starmer will confront each other in their first televised debate of the UK general election campaign tonight.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 12 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, In the second story, it goes "unprecedented headwave */-s,/* with temperatures...". That's the only mistake today. Good job and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 11 дней назад
おはようございます again, Hillary, I have noted another correction you did for me yesterday, 'unprecedented heatwaves with'. ありがとうございます! Have a nice day in advance to day too.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 14 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nickey Schiller Grey from the BBC: ◇ UK general election 2024: In the UK, Scotland’s first minister, John Swinney, officially launches the SNP’s general election campaign less than a month after he became Party leader. Meanwhile, Labour is pledging to reduce legal migration levels as the Conservatives promise to build 100 new doctor surgeries in England and boost the number of available appointments. ◇ Mexico election: Mexicans are the polls in an election, which is almost certain to result in the country’s first female president. It’s been the most violent election campaign in modern Mexican history. ◇ South Africa election talks: South Africa’s ruling ANC says it will talk to all parties about forming a coalition government after losing its majority for the first time in 30 years. ◇ Chinese spacecraft on Moon: And a Chinese spacecraft has landed on the far-side of the Moon in a landmark mission to retrieve rock and soil samples.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 12 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, I recommend removing the comma in the Mexico story. That's all. No mistakes! Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 11 дней назад
おはようございます, Hillary, I have noted well no need for the comma just before 'which'. ありがとうございます! Have a nice weekend with your lovely familiy members.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 15 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Anna Foster from the BBC: ◇ South Africa election results: South African parties get ready for coalition talks as the ruling ANC loses its majority for the first time in 30 years with the official results due to be published on Sunday. Cyril Ramaphosa’s party has 40% of the votes, which is well down from the 58% that they received in the previous election. ◇ UK general election 2024: In the UK, the electoral campaign goes on. The Labour leader, Sir Keir Starmer, has pledged to reduce illegal migration levels if they win the election while the prime minister, Rishi Sunak, promises to build 100 new doctor surgeries and boost a number of available appointments. ◇ Irael-Gaza war: Two key fa-right figures in Israel’s government are threatening to leave their posts and collapse the government if Benjamin Netanyahu agrees to the US peace proposals in Gaza. They argue that they will oppose any deal before Hamas is destroyed.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 12 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, In the second, UK story, it is */legal/* migration levels, and "and boost */the/* number of available appointments". Also you misspelled "far-right" in the last story and it is "peace proposal" not "proposals". Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 15 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nickey Schiller from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Israel and Hamas have given broadly positive responses to a new proposal that would lead a permanent ceasefire in Gaza. The three-part plan would begin with a six-week ceasefire with Israeli forces withdrawing from populated areas of Gaza. The deal could eventually lead to a permanent cessation of hostilities. ◇ Trump trial guilty verdict: Following the historic conviction of Donald Trump, President Biden has said it is reckless for his predecessor to say the trial was wrecked. The Republican candidate was found guilty of 34 counts of falsification of business records. Mr. Trump says he will appeal the conviction. ◇ South Africa elections: And South African parties are gearing up coalition talks as the ruling African National Party Congress looks set to lose its majority in Parliament after Wednesday’s general election. With counting almost completed, the ANC’s share of the vote stands at around 40%.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 17 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Martine Croxall from the BBC: ◇ Trump found guilty: Donld Trump has been convicted of all 34 counts of falsifying business records in an historic criminal trial in New York. It’s the first time a former US president has been convicted of a crime. ◇ War in Ukraine: US officials say President Biden has for the first time given permission for Ukraine to use US supplied weapons to strike targets in Russia, but only near the Kharkiv region. ◇ South Africa election: With just over half the votes in South Africa’s general election now counted, ruling ANC is on course to lose its parliamentary majority.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 16 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, Nice to see you again. You misspelt “found” in the first headline but made no transcription mistakes, good job! 🎉 Have a good day :) By the way, which city do you live in? I made a Japanese-Dutch penpal that lives in Tokyo.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 15 дней назад
おはようございます again to Hillary, I have noted well one mistake in the first headline. ありがとうございます !!! 今日も良い一日を !!! PS: I am staying in Kisarazu City in the opposite side of Tokyo over the Tokyo Bay while working in Tokyo three or four times a week. My workplace is in Nihionbashi, 日本橋 in Japanese. Your friend knows well where it is, I think. Hopefully, we (I, my wife, two children and three grandchildren) are expecting very much to meet you here in Japan.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 17 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lucy Grey from the BBC: ◇ Hong Kong activists convicted: A Hong Kong court finds 14 pro-democracy activists guilty of subversion in the largest use yet of a China imposed national security law. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The UN says the amount of humanitarian aid entering Gaza has decreased by two thirds since Israel began its military operation in Rafah earlier this month. ◇ South Africa election: Early results from South Africa’s general election have the ruling ANC short of the 50% vote share that they need to remain in office without coalition partners. ◇ Trump trial: Jurors in Donald Trump’s historic hush-money trail in New York will resume. their deliberations later on Thursday.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 16 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, I recommend a hyphen in the first story’s “China/-/imposed national…”. And you accidentally put a full stop in the last sentence. By the way, the last story starts with an “And”. That is all. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 15 дней назад
おはようございます, Hillary, I have noted well two mistakes taught by you. ありがとうございます! Have a nice and safe day in advance today.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 20 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Schiller from the BBC. ◇ South Africa general election: South Africa’s president, Cyril Ramaphosa, has cast his ballot in the country’s general election, in a vote that could see his government ANC Party lose its majority. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Israeli forces carry out fresh strikes in Rafah in southern Gaza despite mounting international concern over its military operation there. ◇ Trump trial: Closing arguments are over in Donald Trump’s hash money trial with jurors set to begin their deliberations. ◇ Ex-Thai PM to be indicted: And prosecutors in Thailand are to charge the former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra for insulting the monarchy. ◇ North Korean trash balloons: And North Korea sends dozens of balloons carrying rubbish over the border to South Korea in retaliation for propaganda leaflets sent north.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 21 день назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Geeta Guru-Murthy from the BBC. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Palestinian officials say that at least 45 people have been killed at a refugee camp in Rafah. Israel says its air strikes targeting Hamas set off a fire, killing civilians. ◇ Papua New Guinea landslide: Papua New Guinea now estimates that more than 2,000 people were buried by a devastating landslide in a remote village. ◇ Macron in Germany: French President Emanuel Macron is in Germany on Day 2 of the first official state visit to the country in 24 years. He’s expected to deliver a major speech on the Continent’s future. ◇ South Africa’s energy grid: South Africa has seen far fewer electricity blackouts in the last few months. Critics say it could be an attempt to buy more votes for the forthcoming general election.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 22 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Sciller from the BBC: ◇ UK General Election: The UK’s general election campaign continues with the Labour leader, Sir Kier Starmer, due to make it a speech to target undecided voters. It comes after a weekend that saw Tories unveil a plan that would bring back mandatory national service. ◇ Risking violent crime in Kenya: In other news, as Kenya struggles with rising violent crime. We follow a former criminal as he tries to persuade men to turn in their illegal firearms. ◇ Migrant deaths at US border: Rescue crews in Texas say they’ve witnessed an unprecedented rate of drownings as more people are trying to make a deadly river crossing over the border from Mexico. ◇ Voting in Indian-administered Kashmir: And we also take a look at Indian-administered Kashmir in the first general election since the Modi government took away the region’s special status.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 22 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lucy Grey from the BBC: ◇ War in Ukraine: Russia bombs a crowded DIY store in Ukraine’s second city of Kharkiv, killing at least 11 people and wounding 35. The Ukrainian president, Volodymyr Zelensky, said over 200 people have been inside the supermarket when it was attacked. ◇ Asia heatwave: Temperatures sore across Southeast Asia and a severe heatwave threatens public health. Jacobabad, the city in Pakistan, is expected to hit 49 degrees later on today. UNICEF has said that the heatwave could be putting the lives of children at risk. ◇ Disney songwriter dies: And the American songwriter behind some of Disney’s biggest musicals, including Mary Poppins and The Jungle Bird, has died. The Walt Disney Company has paid tribute to Richard Sherman, who’s died at the age of 95, describing him as a legend alongside his brother, Robert. He wrote songs for many musicals and the pair won two Oscars and three Grammys.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 22 дня назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lukwesa Burak from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The European Union’s top diplomat says the bloc must choose between supporting international law or Israel. Josep Borrell was speaking after the UN’s highest court ordered the Israeli military to halt its offensive in Rafah. Israel signaled it would ignore any order to halt its operations. ◇ School shooting lawsuits: Relatives of the victims of the Uvalde school massacre in Texas two years ago are taking legal action against several major companies. They accused the social media firm Meta, Activision, the maker of the ‘Call of Duty’ video games, and a gun manufacturer of promoting dangerous weapons to teenagers. ◇ Kenyan police due in Haiti: And Kenya’s president, William Ruto, told the BBC that around 1,000 police officers from his country will begin arriving in Haiti in three to four weeks. The force is being deployed to tackle surging gang violence in the country.
@jeandupuis9946
@jeandupuis9946 23 дня назад
thank you
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 25 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Shiller from the BBC: ◇ Papua New Guinea landslide: Dozens of people are feared dead after a massive landslide in the remote area of Papua New Guinea. ◇ Mallorca collapse: Four people have died, and several are still believed to be trapped after a two-story building collapsed on the Spanish Island of Mallorca. ◇ Myanmar’s frontline: And coming Up, we’re on the frontline with Myanmar’s resistant fighters, the civilians risking everything to overthrow the military.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 25 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu In the first story it goes “in */the/* remote area of…”. And for the last story, it is a single sentence going “fighters, the civilians *//* risking everything”. Also, there is no reason to capitalise “coming up” at the start. Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 24 дня назад
Good morning, Hillary, I have noted well three mistakes you raised up for me. ありがとうございます ! Have a nice and enjoyaable day in a first day of this week.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 25 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Nicky Shiller from the BBC: ◇ UK general election: Political leaders in Britain are taking to the campaign trail after Rishi Sunak called a general election for the fourth of July. ◇ Iran president burial: The Iranian president Ibrahim Raisi’s body arrives at his hometown ahead of his burial. He died along with the country’s foreign minister and six others in a helicopter crash on Sunday. ◇ New Caledonia unrest: France’s president Macron promises to restore peace to the Frech Pacific territory of New Caledonia following more than a week of violent unrest.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 25 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu In the first story it is “for */the fourth of/* July”. That’s the only mistake for today. Good job and have a good day.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 25 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu In the first story it is “for */the fourth of/* July”. That’s the only mistake for today. Good job and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 24 дня назад
おはようございます, Hillary, I have noted well one mistake, the fourh of July. ありがとうございます! Have a nice day in advance today too.
@ostendfaxpost1
@ostendfaxpost1 27 дней назад
Anerkennung? In welchen Grenzen bitte?
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 27 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Anna Foster from the BBC: ◇ Palestinian recognition: Spain, Ireland and Norway say they will recognize an independent Palestinian state, leading Israel to recall its ambassadors. ◇ Iran president funeral: Tens of thousands of Iranians join a funeral procession from President Ebrahim Raisi, who died in a helicopter crash on Sunday. ◇ Myanmar’s frontline: Rebel fighters in Myanmar tell a BBC that they are confident of victory against the military government. We’ll bring you a special report from the frontline.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 25 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu In the second story it is “the” not “a” funeral procession and the last story starts with an ‘ */And/* rebel fighters tell */the/* BBC”. That is all. Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 27 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Sarah Campbell from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The BBC hears accusations of Israeli mistreatment of Palestinian detainees from Gaza. One medic says it amounts to torture. ◇ Funeral of Iran’s president: The funeral procession begins for Iran’s President Raisi, who was killed in a helicopter crash on Sunday. This is Tabriz, a city near to where the crash happened. Thousands are paying their respects. ◇ Blood scandal compensation: The UK government’s expected to outline plans for a compensation scheme for victims of the NHS contaminated blood scandal.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 26 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu Only one mistake today: there is no apostrophe ‘s in the last story at “The */UK/* government’s”. Good job today and have a good day.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 25 дней назад
Good evening, Hillary, I have noted well one mistake you raised up for me. ありがとうございます! Have a good and enough sleep to recover yourself well. Good night!
@berndhofmann752
@berndhofmann752 29 дней назад
Unsere lächerlicher Rechten.😂😂😂😂😂
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 29 дней назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Sarah Campbell from the BBC: ◇ Iran’s president killed: Iran’s president and the foreign minister are killed after their helicopter went down in the northwest of the country. The two men were returning from a visit to the border with Azerbaijan. There appeared to be no survivors. ◇ Infected blood scandal: Waiting for the truth, the public inquiry into the UK’s infected blood scandal will publish its final report later. ◇ Taiwan’s news president: Taiwan’s new president is sworn into office at a time of heightened tensions with China. ◇ Blooming lovely: And coming up roses, the world’s famous Chelsea Flower Show gets underway in London.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 29 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, There is no 'the' at the start in "Iran's president and *//* foreign minister" and it is 'appear' not 'appeared'. And in the last story, it is 'world-famous' not 'world's famous'. Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Anna Foster from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The Israeli prime minister has brushed aside the latest criticism from within his own war cabinet, responding to scathing comments by Benny Gantz. Benjamin Netanyahu said implementing his demands would amount to defeat for Israel. Mr. Gantz has threatened to withdraw his party from Israel’s governing coalition. ◇ Usyk beats Fury: The Ukrainian boxer Oleksandr Usyk has become the first undisputed world heavyweight champion in a quarter of a century. He beat Britain’s Tyson Fury in a fiercely competitive contest in the Saudi capital, Riyad, which went to the entire 12 rounds. The Ukrainian finally won on points. ◇ Flooding in Brazil: And further bad weather is hampering rescue efforts in the Brazilian state of Rio Grande do Sul where record floods have left huge areas underwater. In the three weeks since the storms hit, heavy rains have led rivers and lakes to overflow and have killed at least 150 people.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 29 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, The British boxer's name is spelt Tyson and the story goes "which went *//* the entire 12 rounds". And the third story goes "In the three weeks since the */storms/* hit". Good job today and have a good day!
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 27 дней назад
Good evening again, Hillary, I have noted well three mistakes you let me know above. "いつも、ありがとうございます" means "I always appreciate your support for me to study English". Continue to sleep well with sweat deams.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Anna Foster from the BBC: ◇ War in Ukraine: President Zelensky has admitted that Ukraine’s lack of military manpower is sapping its forces' morale. He was speaking to the French news agency on the eve of the implementation of a new law which will extent Kiev’s powers of conscription. Mr. Zelensky reiterated his country’s need for better air defenses. ◇ Sean ‘Diddy’ Combs video: Security footage has emerged appearing to show the American rapper Sean Diddy Combs attacking his ex-girlfriend Cassie Ventura in a hotel hallway in 2016. The BBC hasn't independently verified the video, which surfaced in the wake of legal action taken last year by Ms. Ventura against Mr. Combs. ◇ Golfer charged: And the world number one men’s golfer, Scottie Scheffler, has been charged with assaulting a police officer outside the venue where he's playing in the major US tournament, the PGA Championship. He was arrested in Kentucky before being released.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 29 дней назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, In the first sentence I recommend adding a posessive apostrophe so it reads "sapping its forces' morale". In the second story, it is "The BBC */hasn't/* independently'..." and in the third story it is "where */he's/* playing in the...". Good job today and have a good day :)
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi 27 дней назад
Good evening, Hillary, I have noted well 3 mistakes you raised up for me. ありがとうございます! Have a good and enough sleep to recover yourself well.
@Blackmoerder
@Blackmoerder Месяц назад
Russland und China, da kommt noch was...
@berndhofmann752
@berndhofmann752 Месяц назад
Wer will schon eine Partei wählen, die ein verlängerter Arm Moskaus ist? Nur diejenigen, die das ebenfalls wollen!
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Matthew Amroliwala from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The first aid shipment using a temporary pier off Gaza has gone ashore. The UN warns the maritime corridor is not a replacement for faster land routes. ◇ Slovakia PM shooting: Slovakia’s prime minister remains in a critical but stable condition after an assassination attempt. He’s just undergone a two-hour operation. ◇ Afghanistan floods: After the deadly flash floods in Afghanistan that’s killed more than 300 people, we get the latest on the search for hundreds who are still missing. ◇ India’s spice trade: And the threat to India’s $4 billion spice trade over concerns with possible contamination in products from two popular brands.
@hillaryread8006
@hillaryread8006 Месяц назад
Hi, Yoshimitsu, It is " */we/* get the latest" in the Afghanistan floods story and "And the */threat/* ..." in the last story. Good job today and have a good day! Apologies, I didn't see your last email so I didn't know you had started here again. Also, I'm going to get myself a penpal! I got the Slowly app and have sent a letter to a guy. We'll see if he replies.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
Good morning, Hillary, Thank you very much for returning to here and checking my draft again. I appreciate you very much by my heart. Noted to acknowlege the two mistakes you raised for me. PS: I can see you are now in a very good moment, hoping to deliver your warm feel to a guy shortly. Have a good first day of this week !!!
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Annita McVeigh from the BBC: ◇ Slovakia PM shot: Police have charged a man with the attempted murder of Slovakian Prime Minister Robert Fico, who’s in a serious condition after being shot. Meanwhile, the country’s politicians have called for a new less divisive type of politics. ◇ Putin in China: President Putin is given a red-carpet welcome on his state visit to China and signs a joint declaration with President Xi outlining the two countries’ strategic alliance. ◇ Israel-Gaza war hearing: We’ll be alive at Hague as South Africa asks the International Court of Justice to instruct Israel to stop its offensive in Rafah.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Sarah Campbell from the BBC: ◇ Georgia mass protests: Protesters in Georgia vow to continue demonstrations after Parliament passes a law barring what the government calls foreign influence. ◇ France manhunt: A huge manhunt continues in France to find an escaped prisoner after two prison officers were killed when a heavily armed gang ambushed their prison van. ◇ Boeing filing: The US Justice Department says Boeing could be criminally prosecuted for two deadly crashes involving its 737 Max aircraft after it breached a settlement. We’d be talking about that in a moment. ◇ Afghanistan floods: Afghan officials say the search for bodies continues for five days after flash flooding tore through Baghlan and other northern provinces.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lauren Taylor from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The United Nations says one of its staff members was killed and another injured as they traveled in a marked car to a hospital in southern Gaza. ◇ Obesity drug ‘game-changer’: Hailed as a game-changer, a new study suggests widely used weight-loss drugs could cut the risk of heart attacks and strokes. ◇ War in Ukraine: America’s top diplomat is in Kiev on offering weapons and reassurances as Ukraine forces continue to battle a Russian offensive in the east. ◇ Assisted dying debate: And Isle of Man is expected to move a step closer to legalizing assisted dying. It would become the first part of the British Isles to pass such legislation.
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
◇ Eurovision final: The grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest is underway in Malmo, Sweden, against a background of protests against Israel’s participation. ◇ Israel-Gaza war: The Israeli military says around 300,000 Palestinians have left the city of Rafah since they’ve been ordered to evacuate on Monday. The UN warns the moving to an area which lacks basic infrastructure. ◇ Afghanistan floods: The UN’s World Food Program says hundreds of people have been killed and thousands of homes destroyed by major flooding in Northern Afghanistan. ◇ Georgia demonstration: Tens of thousands of demonstrators in Georgia have taken to the streets of Tbilisi in the latest protests against legislation, they say hostile to opposition. ◇ Solar spectacular: And the most powerful solar storm in 21 years triggers a celestial light show in many parts of the world with scientists expecting another display later this evening.
@walterh.42
@walterh.42 Месяц назад
Die Welt ist im Trudel...was wird alles noch geschehen
@CharlieMurahashi
@CharlieMurahashi Месяц назад
I would like English native speakers to correct my draft transcription of stories presented by Lauren Taylor from the BBC: ◇ Israel-Gaza war: Israel orders the evacuation of more areas of Rafah in Gaza, where over a million Palestinians are sheltering. It comes as Washington says Israel may have used American supplied weapons in breach of international humanitarian law in Gaza. ◇ Russia crosses border: Hundreds of people are fleeing continued clashes in Ukraine’s Kharkiv region a day after Russia sent troops across the border. ◇ Eurovision final: A contestant under investigation and protests on the streets, will politics overshadow today’s Eurovision song contest final? ◇ Solar spectacular: And the most powerful solar storm in 21years triggers spectacular celestial light shows in many parts of the world.