Oh,this animatic portrays them like the three precious caring beans they are. I sure hope they all make it out safe and sound and they survive and live happily ever after. Sobbing
I love how you can actually see how Ody is old and desperate now. His hair and beard are long. His clothes aren't kingly anymore. (And damn is he fine) Poseidon is just how I've always imagined him with the fish-like parts. He IS the sea. And the sea is ruthless. I love the power establishment change. In the beginning Poseidon is just barely above Ody but then he starts growing. By the time there is a huge water wall, Poseidon is so huge that Ody needs to look far up to see him. Penelope and Telemachus are so cute! I love their designs. And the way Ody runs to hug them even tho he knows it isn't them but water. And that is how Poseidon gets him to get in the water. I love how visibly terrified Ody looks as the water levels start rising on him. He tries to fight it but he's old and tired. Now he is totally at Poseidon's mercy. And ruthlesness is mercy upon ourselves. In conclusion, I love everything about this. I can't understand how this doesn't have more likes and views? This is incredible. I also apologize in advance for my grammar. I am not native.
Мне так нравится смотреть, как Эврилох заботиться о Полите. Просто такие милашки оба, я не могу 💕 I love watching Eurylochus take care of Polites. They're both just so cute, I can't 💕
This is so cool. I love the little unique design choices you made for Polites and the cyclops. And the way you made the story progress with the little interactions between these three best friends. A sad "no wonder" Polites was targeted later. Seriously, if you enjoyed doing this, please do more.
Great Animatic! I love the detail of how Ody adds the Lotus to the wine and how Polites is the one who shoots the sheep and gets picked up- it really adds to the tension and it makes Ody's quick thinking more understandable. I like how Polites lowers the bow when it seems to be going towards negotiation. Eudys expressions (indeed all the characters) were particularly good, I really get a sense of how these are three old friends. How the camera goes to the dead sheep when Ody mentions that this can end without bloodshed is awesome too. Only (mild) criticism is that the other shipmates don't appear and I don't get a good idea of the geography of the cave. Really enjoyed this! Going to check out what else you made!
@benlewis4241 I'm terrible at backgrounds (working on it) and about halfway through making this I had the thought of "Oh shit I forgot the REST of the crew... welp... to late now!" Thank you for your kind words!! I'll work on improving in my next one
The pain you can hear in Polyphemus' voice is so heartbreaking. And him holding the poor sheep! 😭 Honestly, I can't say that I wouldn't have done the same thing in his place (not the cannibalism part).
HOLY CRAP! polythemus GRABBING POLITES!! ive seen onces where they grab odysseus BUT NEVER HIM THAT MAKES ODYS WORDS SO DIFFERENT! then he drops him AND EURY RUNS TO CATCH HIM MY HEART! also the boop at the beginning is cute
@samlikesrats9518 For some reason I always imagined it being a crew mate (Polites just adds a visual moral dilemma, it's why he hesitates to shoot Polyphemus when he has the chance), because it sounds like Odysseus is bargaining but he doesn't sound afraid enough for it to be his own life in danger. I also thought it would be a good way to realistically show Eury, Polites, and Ody's friendship. ❤️ Thank you so much, it means a lot
WOW, i love how protective you made them of polites & esp how polites hesitates to shoot the cyclops, even at the risk of his own life - this is now one of my fave animatics for sure! great job!!
Hiii! I'm excited to see where your channel goes! I would recommend getting a better quality camera in the future, your mic seems okay though. A lot of people with a short attention span will be unwilling to watch a long video when it has bad quality. I would LOVE to see some speedpaints and animatics!
hiiii!! I dont know you yet but im happy to see more and also I LOVE animatics so you are already very cool to me ^^ excited to see what your content is like!! I personally loveee animatics so id love to see those are also like would be fine with waiting- BUT ALSO I would love to watch gaming (I ALSO LOVEEE THE SIMS ^^) and shitty gaming sounds fun lol- I also love webtoons lmao- honestly all the ideas youve talked about so far are like litreally all stuff I enjoy a lot so im excited to see how this goes!! :D
Ooo. Wait. I don’t know if you are into doing some reading for videos, but I saw you had a playlist of Epic: The Musical. You could read some epics and draw certain scenes. There are plenty of them you could dive into, animate, and talk about. Documenting all of your research along the way.
I've actually read both the Iliad and Odyssey (I'll get to the Aeneid soon), and I had an idea of a retelling of that trilogy. I'm only in the concept phase, but that could be something I do in the future
Helloooo! 😁 I got recommended by the wonderful RU-vid algorithm and I’d say I am kinda excited even though I don’t know you. I hope you have a SUPER day! Can’t wait to see what you make!
Hey! This is really fun, and I'd love to see some shitty gaming. Tbh I complete trash at most games so it would be fun to see someone else do it too. :} Hope you have a great day
