aside from rolling waaay too long (try to do only up to a few rolls before doing something), once he (the attacker) has a point to continue in towards the opponent/partner, he steps back, while giving up any angle he might have gained, to do superfluous stuff. you need to recognize when you need to get in on the opponent (on an angle of course) and not give up your advantage. otherwise looks good.
@@antonvanthomasvingtsun6153 many thanks for your response. Is this by invitation only? Or are you willing to train/work with a novice? I have been searching diligently to find you and would be honoured to be trained by you. Perhaps we could discuss in more detail?