This is a copy of Avatar.

“It made his neck stand on end”? As opposed to what, collapsed like a concertina?

If you’re actually accepting requests or suggestions. Could you make a story about a dog or a cat pregnant with a xenomorph embryo before giving birth to a chestburster?

good show

Looks like her collars too tight

Tittle does not match the story.

omfg another one, EVERY GOD DAMN sic-fi,HFY sy-fi always A FUCKING FEMALE main character even the side character holy shit. galactic leader, humanity consuler leader, president, main character human marines, the genius that found a cure for humanity. seriously what is up?

Anti climatic, I can't get that time back

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This could have been a great story, but it was too short, lacked intensity, and didn't really go anywhere

Possibly p the silliest piece I have encountered since I was in my teens. I did not fall for this line of BS back then and I aint gonna buy it now that I am in my seventies.

The narrator has no life, barely any inflection, no emotion, what could be a riveting tale is a stale report. Sadley, I could not enjoy this story.

Does not make sense . ok world.

Your run of the mill Ai trash "story" channel that masquerade as writers. This utter sloop is so bad. You'll be better off taking up bird watching.

...so she died, too...??😢

Well they call it Mother earth, Mother Nature. So have you ever woke your mother being a jerk. You disappear fast. I would not think about the event being eerie or be fearful. You not ever alone earth has your back . Great difference story. Change will do good.

I like me somma this. Weird they know what a dog is but don't understand dogs have keen senses but minor overisite I guess plus there's the fact they didn't realize we are basically a warband at this point lol

I love the way they acted when the ship landed, They act like scared little children.🤣😂 Elana had bigger balls than the guys.They were so stupid. When someone has the power to control the planet & they say leave. You go. Duh!!!

They're his children too. He is so selfish & cowardly.

Please do the rest of the story.👍😇

twenty minutes of the MC being in denial, time for the link/bond to enlighten him with love and his family. Have fun

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Well, finish it damn you...

That worked a different short story . A Captain ending.

I don’t mind being an object of affection towards others in this universe, but remember if you’re not alive on this planet developing, it performing tasks for evolution for the future then you are not participating and helping earth 🌎 so you are not allowed to play here anymore Goodbye

jumbled thoughts that would not fit together. I would expect an educated woman to comport herself better. But you make her sound like an 8 year old. Wait another 20 years, maybe 30. This is shit.

an efficiency so precise it was terrifying. crap writing.

Nice one

super cool storie 👍 🇩🇰 🇪🇺