Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I like how it deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
From Genin to Kage, That's quite the promotion, And to think Naruto once said "There's no shortcut to becoming Hokage' Funny how the Daimyo definitely disagrees, as The Daimyo has authority to issue the order appoint a Genin ato the Kage position. Though, If I was in Naruto place, As an indirect way of getting a little payback on Kakashi, I would have asked Sasuke What kind of punishment would he give to a subordinate That is too high value to execute that downplaying or giving credit for your work to someone else? Then issuing the punishment to Kakashi, that Sasuke answered with. Then when Kakashi complains I'd just point out that the punishment was Sasuke's answer to being asked about what he'd think is a fitting punishment.
Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like some what deviates from the actual story I do like the plot line I also like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up to you at work
Naruto fanfic writers really need to stop using "precious" all the time. It's become such a writing meme at this point and it mak3s it seem like they have no creativity. Like, is it so hard to say "important" or "love and care for"?
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like plotline I like the character development I like the idea of Naruto having the snake contract I do wish there was more of the snake in this I do which it wus a lot longer and I hope you come back and make a part two and keep up the good work
