"This is Elon Musk" makes no sense if this should be a commercial. Also, the car is standing still for too long. Yeah, it is beautiful I agree, but it takes too long to get to part people like the most about cars - having fun. Make the video with a quick transition to action and with often cuts with the beat of the song you're using. This will keep the attention of an audience for longer. Also, I think the outro should be kept with black background since white highlights the screen ratio more than a logo (and also is painful to watch at night but never mind, I am a dark mode fanboy). What I think you did good is the movie screen ratio, and the filter you used. It brings seriousness, I also like the first 15 seconds of how the car unveils itself, very well done.
@@FrostKeygen so what I am not? The title says it is a commercial, commercials should not be understandable just by "the chosen ones". Commercials are for mainstream. If you make a shitty product, no ad for professionals can prove them otherwise. The purpose is to make guys who know nothing feel like they know the thing if good. Sorry, this is how ait is.
@@MartinRusnak Foolish, do not write anything else and do not disgrace yourself. They wrote to you in human language that there is no purpose here to demonstrate how crazy the car is driving. The video immerses you in the atmosphere of technology, space, futurism, the future and at the same time a connection with nature (lightning - thunder - electricity, I will chew it, because it takes a long time to reach you) this was the goal. Commerce does not mean advertising, at least read what it means. The title does not say - THIS IS ADVERTISING! Commerce is written in the titles of my videos. my channel is a portfolio channel and accordingly demonstrates my work, for which I get money, RU-vid helps me promote my product, THIS IS COMMERCE. All the viewers, acquaintances, friends, including the customer, really liked the idea and its implementation by me, but it is YOU who are "unique" with us and it is YOU who did not like something here. Therefore, before calling someone else's work and product "shit", make sure that you yourself have not crap yourself.
@@FrostKeygen I didn't mean to call your product shit, it was a metaphor. Btw. looked up the word commerce for you and you're right, I didn't get it sorry.
