If you still have the original audio file... Mix it better... Bring out more high end, less bass, and balance them off the mid. Honestly it just sounds like you jacked every slider to max and that makes a staticy blown out speaker sound which covers ALOT of what you have going on.
Nah bra u got all effd up.. learn to be 15 mins early to class to meetings to interviews and I promise you'll more of a impression then being late fool