They call it toxic Only I can see the love of entire universe? It's like the sea and land The wave of love comes and goes but never stops ! But it's always the sea never the land I wonder ever did the sea ask the land why Or it's just being a giver? Eventhough the sun is there Why the sea only wants to be with the land Is that is what we call OBSESSION? (Poem by a 17 yr old hopeless romantic girl😂)
I love the quote, 'No matter how beautiful the moon is, the sunflower will always lean towards the sun.' It fits so beautifully with the song 'Sunflower.'"
Okay I'm not good at writing poems but I tried Here it is PART 1 Every night, I talk to you, A school girl worrying about Monday too, Fearing the end of the night's embrace, And the long wait for our next sweet space. Bleeding scars from sharp thoughts I keep, Wondering if you'll love me still, I weep, If you see the real me, will you stay? Or will I face another lonely day? PART 2 But then I am with you again Your warm presence like an essence of kindness, Poured into my heart, it made the bleeding clot, When you said, you love to love me, Even if it's so hard to love me. What if you're the benediction from God? Which I never prayed for. What if this page of my story soars? Like in desert a palm tree grows. What if you're wondering the same?
That hair band line was really something 🫠 And I actually wrote my first ever poem the day you uploaded this video Shakeel… I just watched the video today but that kavithaigal title in the video really did something to me… I really wrote a heartfelt poem and after watching your video I must admit that I’m a rhyme scheme freak 😅…. This is a new part of me that I want to embrace and I really love it … And to think that a Shakeel video was the kickstart I needed was something that I never expected to say….if my poems lead me somewhere, I’ll make it clear that this was the video which started my journey…Thank you again for doing what you do.. do share more poems and stories soon ✨
Hey ..my friend said that you came in her dream!! .. you guys were getting married! 😂 And she is a Muslim 👀 she is asking allah if you are the one for her 🎀..
9th std la enga schl la irundhu kotittu pona 1st long tour OOTY dha So indha place romba special ♥️ Appo naa en frnds lam romba enjoy pannom indhula irukura almost ella place um ponom 9:54 That mountain view was the best... It was like 5 years ago apdiye revisit panna mathiri iruku Ippo avanga yaarume en kuda illa 🥲 Soo yeah... I miss them
@@_shitkeel_ I believe in god Hope he had a better plans than mine and I'm grateful for him that I didn't even have a one toxic people around me till now 🧿🧿🧿 Thank you friend ! <3 I wish you and your friends the same to stick stronger and longer 🫂♥️
14:13 Book reviews or talks about books will really make me Happy . Cause I am a person who likes reading books but now I am not that much into due to my studies and I dont have such person to talk about books and or someone to give me book suggestions . Please shakeeley 🦭🦭🦭
Not a poem...but a quote "Eyes so deep that my phobia flew Heart too soft that's in very few Clearly not into people I knew What sort of thing I saw in you?" (Bare minimum)
Asalam walaikum....Thank you so much shakeel ❤️....i just felt like I'm seeing myself on you.... And I'm so happy to see you that , you have grown up well by analysing your self... This video just turned into a kinda motivation video man...keep posting those kinds of videos ❤️✨
andha I will die for her rain, i will die till she rains vera level paa. i rather study ur poems than the ones in my english tb. the poems were so clever and creative
Unga kashthatha avangalodha oda compare pannadheenga, we all are different ans neenga unga prechanaigal pathi pesna attention seeker aaga maateenga. Talk to a really trust worthy person, fulla vent out pannunga, apdi yaarume illana oru note la fulla epdi feel panreenganu kotti theethurunga Be kind to yourself Hope you heal soon
I'll just drop my poem here that I don't remember the date of. Insignificantly significant : Being born is an event. Being born as a human is rare. You have made it this far. Congratulations! Because it is a wonder. Live this life wisely, Treat other human beings as your own. Because you are just a speckle and microscopic in this far-spread universe. If there is anything you could do being born as a human, Spread love and tolerance, but not hate. Just remember we have this one life, Do good deeds as long as you can, As all of us are going to perish one day, And be gone insignificantly, As that bit of dust, We always were.
I also have the hobby of writing poems Sometimes i upload it on various websites 😅coz i thought i was gud at it But after reading the poems in thiz comment section i realised how mokka I'm 😂 This comment section and your video made me feel like returning to a toxicless society 😢❤thanks bro
All i wanna say were ruined my by own words All i did was lost in the search of words No words can hold those emotions of mind If it does.... There is no search for words No need to lost No emotions to live❤ Here's my kavithai😅And sorry for the late comment
since everyone here are showing their talents, let me drop my song. i wrote it, composed it, made beat with hand, made my group practice it, and performed it in class:) dont we get tired everyday just trying to be flawless expecting perfection but sometimes we fail there are some moments in our life when we want to give up stress and depression sometimes we drown always remember that our struggles will pave a way tiring and sleepless nights will be worthy when the time is right so get up and shine through your darkness god is always by our side with his love and strength everyday we will do something good today -A:)
Smth I wrote about my ex crush Eyes as golden as the sunset Piercing through my soul like a bullet His hair portrays the waves of the sea Urging me to play with it for a lifetime glee Voice so deep like the Atlantic ocean I could go on forever listening to his thoughts with passion His smile is my key to heaven Those hidden dimples make my heartbeat weaken The sweat droplets dropping off his hair It hurts me, that to him, I'm not the one to care Every time he wears the football jersey he adores Seeing him happy brings joy to my heart’s core..
To go on midnight drives Blasting out music to forget our cries To feel the night air slap across my face Forgetting my worries, going on with the pace To sit and admire the colours of the sky like peach Perspire the salty smell at dawn, oh how I love the beach To spend the night gazing at the constellations Sometimes this feels better than a vacation To read the imaginations of someone on paper That’s how the clock ticks when I don’t feel like a napper To distance myself from my surroundings with music Its the only thing that doesn’t make me feel sick
