is my music good? be honest and please comment on both of my songs with advice so i can get better any help from anyone would mean a lot i recorded this on iphone btw :)
I waited for a day like this to maybe make a way wit this deciding time I got left to reallign these challenging obstacles I'm facing right in the middle of a downward landslide and inside of this great big huge pile of one way signs that stand off centered and all within these limitations and boundaries that fall cataclysmic candy coated in the great Devine when these times withers away these empty spaces that just ain't mine glorified in the later days when day turns to light shout out to all my ladder day saints creating changes with no support or way to be brave when shit fades to another way of this living sacrifice that leaves us scatterbrained in some sorta way that chatters the frames that once layed the ground work for a once historic set of phenominol play by plays that grace ya presence wit wholesome kopestetic rellevance that strikes a golden chord that finds the core of ya heart in these rhythmatic relics that were sent from the universe
Yeah this pressure make me turn into a diamond I know i broke your heart So f**k the past we could'nt find em This pain gon hurt your body aint gon let it last forever So Baby don't you cry I promise we gon make it better I cant f**k another b*tch Cause we gon ride together Cant even f**k with hoes cause b*tches keep on acting bitter You know i bang that 23 we gonna shine forever These pussy niggas tried to fight me but i swear aint let em
siccin dates pilled up cant hit with nothing only way im ate by mypast is if u run from making a way joking kicked in my ass dirty gun 7 months living to fast
