You have it down technically. Just need to work on the flow. Rushing in some places, dragging in others. Perhaps another few days of practice might have been useful before recording. I can certainly see that you worked hard on the piece. Thumbs up for that.
Bro, it was awesome, during the game you just read my thoughts about every next step, I often play the guitar to the performances of other guitarists and yours was one of the best, you have a great chance of winning, good luck !
