Okay, so. . It started out cool, but then you kinda went a bit too much in with the glitchy movement I feel like a lot of these videos take inspiration from the Rush E Line Rider video for some god forsaken reason and use those tricks in unfitting tracks Like. . . Do something like that for Your Best Nightmare, not Finale, lol Also.. . I'm not doing that little pop quiz at the end. Sorry.
To preface: I'm going to be critical but it's not my intention to sound cruel. I don't like this. Take this with a grain of salt because I don't watch a lot of line rider content but this the most disappointing chart/map i've personally seen. The reason for this is that this one just lacks all the things I want out of line rider. The transitions and random teleports are really clunky and unsatisfying. The layout itself has no cohesion or style, lines then bubbles then boxes the squiggles, there's no consistency to it, very random. It felt quite directionless as well, like I couldn't really predict how it would do anything (unless there was arrow! That's especially sloppy 😟) And then the sense of rhythm was just... Weak. Sometimes it was only lackadaisically following a couple beats or notes and oftentimes it wanted nothing to do with the music at all. My honest suggestion for improvement. Take heart, keep it up, and take a few notes from more skilled mappers (is that the term?) I hope to see you improve and make really terrific things!
I'd like these line rider videos more if they didn't just randomly accelerate the rider or glitch them on and off the sled for no reason. It feels like the physics of the engine are being completely ignored instead of being played around, which is the point of making a line rider music animation
I feel like the audio is slightly earlier than the visuals but that could just be personal preference. This video is definitely going to blow up lol, and if it doesn't it really should've.
Did yu try to draw a horse with the dots or is that an accident? Also, nice! This must have taken a while and I don't know why you would do this, but it looks great.
