AI generated music has plagued the internet , the AI generated algorithm might give more convincing results sometime in the future tho. Just letting you know this doesn't sound like BMTH at all, and no one will buy something they can make on their own with Suno or Udio AI in just 5 minutes
I think if you add a slower beginning like a very natural/nature melody and segway into the chorus as well as include a heavier part towards the end of the chorus at the beginning and at the very end, if that makes sense, it will be spot on. Good beat overall though and it definitely captures the hectic and complicated instrumental feel