Episode: sticky mess Thunderbolt: oh what a lovely (falls down a cliff and screams with this sound ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-fhhz7l86KUU.htmlsi=DB6advHAPKzRXhPh) (Take 2) Thunderbolt: oh what a lovely day 1003: get over here thunderbaby Thunderbolt: “thunderbolt touches 1003’s blows” 1003: baby what are you doing? (Thunderbolt takes the blower and throws at 1003’s face knocking her horn off) Thunderbolt: oh hey a restaurant (Later) Thunderbolt: ugh how do I open this ketchup bottle! (It explodes and the restaurant is covered in ketchup Thunderbolt: “looks around in shock” OH WHAT THE F*** Model5: atleast my french fries is now edible Fedelcode (manager): get out of the restaurant before I call secuirty Thunderbolt: fine! (Later) Thunderbolt: atleast the beach is fine (Pulls out a hotdog and tries to use ketchup on it) Thunderbolt: come on!!! (It explodes again and ketchup was everywhere) Thunderbolt: oh not again P50 (on the stink jet): what the! ATi I t thought I told you not to murder people at the beach yet! Ati: what the I didn’t murder them P50: you tryna lie huh?! Ati: what NOo? (Gets thrown out) Ati: “looks down while falling” hey I will land on the water so I will be fi- “lands on the sand” Ati: sh** (Later again) Thunderbolt: okay this park better and I don’t need to use ketchup this time while I sit on the bench (Triblaster throws a ketchup bottle infront of thunderbolt) Thunderbolt: oh come on!! (Picks up the bottle) Thunderbolt: wait why does it have a timer- OH SH** (bottle explodes and there was ketchup everywhere) Thunderbolt: just why I should stop touching ketchup bottles Allertor: (covered in ketchup) you damn right (Many other sirens is also covered in ketchup approach thunderbolt) Thunderbolt: oh sh** The end
I like the script so far. Only thing I'd like to point out is, that FuryBolt (Or as you wrote there: Mineola) cannot go ahead and end up chasing Tbolt1000T, since she has feelings for 1000H, and no matter how cute anyone can look, she only wants 1000H. Of course, 1000H does not know about this, but I have a feeling, that one day FuryBolt instead of chasing 1000H, she wants to talk with him about her feelings. So maybe can you modify the end of your script? I still like it, don't get me wrong, just you know: I honestly like canon things.
I got a script Episode: the loud bolt Thunderbolt: ok it’s my test day but I hope I was louder hmmm “looks at the blower” maybe if I had 2 blowers I would be louder but who else has a blower? Aha 1003 has one I will just take her’s when she isn’t looking “Later” “He sneaks up and takes the blower” 1003: time for my test “sounds off but makes no sound” Wait why am I not making sound? “Looks down” where the hell is my blower?! “Meanwhile” Thunderbolt: ok time for my test I am really excited about this 1003: hey that’s my blower! Thunderbolt: I don’t care it’s mine now “Sounds off so loud that he blows away 1003” “1003 hits ati and ati breaks in half” Thunderbolt: wow that was pretty loud “Meanwhile” Bosai musen about to take a sip of tea “As the thunderbolt sound gets louder and louder and breaks her window” Bosai musen: wait what the?! Yamaha: what happend? Bosai musen: I don’t know but what I heard was a thunderbolt sounding off “Meanwhile” Chrysler: how the hell are you louder then me! Thunderbolt: just deal with it buddy “Thunderbolt takes furybolts blower and puts it above his” “Sounds off even more loud and explodes” The end
