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I listen to your stories. I mean, I really listen to every word and sentence. I've been told I can write. And this is where it all goes south, in a big hurry. Alex isn't a girl or female. Men do not think like that and do not express their emotions like that. A "wayward strand of hair" Isn't "tucked behind his ear" even if the man has long hair. A man has rows and columns like a spread sheet in the way he processes thoughts, and there really is a box at the 0,0 coordinates. It is the nothing box and men use that box to think about nothing, stilling their thoughts. So everything a man doesn't want to think about right now, fear, insecurity, isolation, homesickness etc. gets put in the nothing box. When that box gets full then a man who is otherwise normal develops ptsd. Despite the misrepresentation in TV and Movies, ptsd is the inability to forget about a traumatic experience that won't fit into the nothing box. Women don't have a nothing box and can't shut off their minds or emotions the way a man can. Your character is a man and not a woman or a gender blended entity without a sex. So write accordingly. If you let a social trend influence your writing you will be remembered as a failure, an also ran, an obscure author who rode the current events for a time, and nothing more. My advice is to stick to the universals that all people know through experiencing them. After you have gotten to the point where you are a best selling author there will be all the time in the world for you to get up on your soap box and preach your ideals to whomever listens. The reversal of the natural order ruined the story. and before you object to save your ego, "just because you can doesn't mean you should" Understand? Now for the part that is the best criticism and probably the part you didn't want to hear. Your writing screams "woman author who imagines herself as a character in her story" until it comes to emotions. When you are writing about human emotions you go all mechanical as if an AI wrote it. A computer program can't understand human emotions. It could use the words and describe the feeling in a general way, but not in a way that touches your audience. Not in a way that draws them into the story and has them feeling what the character feels. Being able to do that is the difference between a writer and a great writer. You write about an artist who uses her talent and authenticity to win a contest, but your story needs a stronger connection with your readers and authenticity. It's not about you, it's all about your audience; the reader. At this point I have commented more than enough. I hope you can use what I told you and you can use it in a good way to improve your writing.
You really need to proof read if you want to be good at this it'll get rid of repetes put in the work and have something you'll be proud of the ai doesn't edit you have to then give it to the ai you can even be the best if you set a voice per person ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A. BABY
I reeeeallly like the idea of humans being a neutral, isolationist space nation for once… like, why we ALWAYS gotta be spearheading EVERY galactic initiative?? 🤣
The Aegis sounds like the Warthog (A-10 Thunderbolt II). Lets make a weapon with massive destruction potential and lets build a spaceship around it to move the damn thing.
Agreed Though I Wouldn't Blame The Artificial Intelligence That Is Being Used It Is Just Following Its Programming Even Though The Person Using It Doesn't Seem It Seems Odd How Many Repeats It'd Take to Make An Artificial Intelligence Boring
I do enjoy the vast majority of the stories posted however, it appears AI written as these same words are repeated in almost all of them. “Palpable, Otherworldly, Ethereal, Bioluminescent, Cacophony, Acrid, Melodic Voice, Iridescent crystal, Crucible”
I wrote a comment to the author of the story and in 20 words or less it is, "Write from experience and the reader needs to have common ground with your characters" You could read that comment and it might help you. You are not merely imagining a story, instead you are using words to get the reader to imagine the story as closely as possible to what you saw in your mind when you imagined it.
To bad you can’t bring yourself to say they was a man, or call Him. But you can call the alien her! Really. Leave the woke crap for the political people and just write your story
is there a place where I can read the HFY stories? I am not a big audiobook fan and I have trouble with the youtube subtitles? I tried to go to redit and RR via their links but could not find the full length stories on either. maybe a discord?
We only create videos for the time-being on RU-vid & Reddit. We will take into consideration to make it into text form in future. Thanks for the feedback
Back in 1992 when i create an love story between an alien female and human male, with love and passion i wrote scenario's about an beautiful exotic powerful female as she transform overtime 1000 centuries from darker to light, a story that will shiver with excitement and dangerous
So 3000 years ago Earth was demolished By group B. People A, the decedents of of Earth want to make the decedents of group B pay for their ancestors crimes. Where have I heard this story before.
Meanwhile on slave planets like planet XYZ which became dependent on the Xantharian shipments of food and necessities all died agonizing death because all Xantharians were recalled for battle.
I kind of like the stories, but a race (us) who cant even feed all its own people, get along or like each other...not to mention how many people "don't like technology"...I feel like these stories are a false sense of achievement for a race of being that are, stupid.
Considering that we humans are so much alike that we are practically clones of each other, and that our nearest relatives here on earth share about 97% of our DNA, think about how attractive for romance do we find them. How many humans would date or marry a bonobo chimpanzee? If they did could there be offspring? (Never mind your brother-in-law). If we go to the stars and find humanoids who look like us, and especially if we can interbreed, then almost certainly they ARE us. Have you ever read the Vedas (sp.?)? Remember, what was believed to be ancient mythology a century and a half ago suddenly became a pretty accurate picture of a war fought with aircraft and nuclear weapons, followed by radiation sickness and some ancient ruins that are still somewhat radioactive. Of course the tales of interstellar travel could still be mythology … maybe.
Hmm Admiral Steal was there to lead the human fleet, but ends up Stealing command of the entire coalition with absolutely no resistance. Talk about Stealing the Show here
Thank you for this story about body acceptance with a non-binary main character. It means a lot to see science fiction teaching us things we should already know but society refuses to acknowledge.
The author's imagination is okay, However, I think that he / she could screen out 75% of adjectives and, in general, the verbosity throughout is quite tiring…
