bruh, i forgot about your stuff, but glad i came back to it. it's a whole new atmosphere in this one. it also seems a bit more refined, although the drum mixing is a bit incoherent. just lower the volume in some parts. for example in the buildup before the last drop. the snare seems a bit too loud. but overall, this is a huge improvement i think, good job!
Atmosphere changed because in this track tried to make music like Golemm. Before it was Machine Girl like (and if you re noticing some grammar mistakes it is not my native language)
@@da-norm_mne don't try to exaggerate elements you try to focus on. what i mean by that is that making a bass just subtly wring in the background also does the job for a calmer song if that's your goal.
If u keep the drum arrangement and add a loop for the melody, you got urself a pretty good breakcore'ish track there, you just need to some more "unff" to the drums and bass
@@da-norm_mnei mean, melody and tune arrangement are like a 2/10. but the drums and percussion are your strengths in this track. about 8/10. take this with a grain of salt tho since i am a hobby producer like yourself most likely
@@da-norm_mne gonna have a listen at them but i'll go to bed now haha. melody and idea in this one btw isn't bad it's just not executed to your full potential i think. you aced the drums, you got the tune as good as in the bag. but you'll most likely have improved at everything since the day you uploaded this. i'll listen to your newer stuff tomorrow.
Ok you can sample whatever you want, but why do u need to sample something that low quality. It is literally my 5th project in fl and i wasn't even trying. But if you need i also have .flp s
